2023届高三英语二轮复习概要写作课件

基于文本阅读的高中英语概要写作微技能培养策略 目 录 Contents 概要写作的定义 概要写作存在的问题及原因 概要写作微技能培养策略 概要写作的批改模式探索 Part.01 概要写作的定义 What is a summary? A summary is a brief statement that gives only the main points of something not the details. 《牛津高阶英语词典》 ( 第 8 版) 概要写作高考要求 提供一篇350个单词左右的文章 （体裁一般为说明文或议论文），要求考生基于该短文写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 评分时主要从以下4个方面考虑： 1. 对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 2. 应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 3. 上下文的连贯性 4. 对各要点表达的独立性情况 Part.02 概要写作存在的问题及原因 1. Unable to find the structure 2.Unable to find the key points 3.Unable to rewrite in your own words 4. Unable to write with beautiful language 概要写作中存在的主要问题 概要写作要心怀读者，假定读者看不到原文，你写的文本是否 make sense。 写概要时，要想象你是在对你的朋友描述或解释这篇文章。 2019学年第一学期9+1高中联盟期中考试 A healthy work ethic and workaholism are two different things. Being a hard worker can bring one a sense of accomplishment and self-worth; workaholism, by contrast, is unhealthy and causes personal problems. To avoid this, it’s important to consider work-life balance and take pleasure in leisure activities. by Eamonn Morris Unlike working hard, workaholics focus only on their work, living an unbalanced life. (要点 1) People may become workaholics due to their devotion to work and high-pressure working atmosphere. (要点 2) While workaholism brings a higher self-esteem level, it has a negative influence on their health and family relationship since workaholics value work over life. (要点 3) Therefore, it is important to strike a balance between work and life.(要点 4) 参考范文 外教作文 What makes a good summary? A good summary should include: 1. the main ideas 2. important details A good summary is short, true and fair. （客观、准确、公正；不渲染、不加入自己的主观评价或观点） A good summary is written in your own words and in a clear order that the original text is presented in. 调查问卷 主要问题 高二人数 占总人数的比例 高三人数 占总人数的比例 A.无法提炼全文主旨 142 50.9% 118 48.2% B.无法理清文章脉络 128 45.9% 59 24.1% C.无法辨别哪些句子是作者的观点，哪些句子是支撑细节