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英语必修第二册同步导学案
读后续写微讲堂
答案精解P4日
读后续写入门篇之多维度衔接
一篇好的文章不仅需要丰富的内容、巧妙的
a smile each day when I gave her the paper,but
构思和规范的表达,还需要具备把这些内容联系
I was no longer able to look into her eyes.
起来的语篇衔接手段。衔接是一种使上下文之
I made up my mind that I would save my
间取得连接与过渡的写作技法,主要作用是使文
paper delivery money,and in three weeks I had
章保持意义上的连贯、文句的流畅和行文的变化。
the seven dollars that I thought would cover the
【典例1】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落
cost of her window.I put the money in an
开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
envelope with a note explaining that I was sorry
Forty-three years seems like a long time to
for breaking her window and hoped that the
remember the name of a mere friend.I have
seven dollars would cover the cost for repairing it.
already forgotten the name of an old lady who
注意:续写词数应为150左右.
was a customer on my paper route when I was a
Paragraph 1:
twelve-year-old boy in Marinette,Wisconsin
I waited until it was dark.
back in 1954.Yet it seems like just yesterday
that she taught me a lesson in forgiveness that I
can only hope to pass on to someone else someday.
Paragraph 2:
On a Saturday afternoon,a friend and I
The next day,I handed the old lady her
were throwing rocks onto the roof of the old
paper.
lady's house from a secret spot in her backyard.
The object of our play was to observe how the
rocks changed to missiles as they rolled to the
roof's edge and shot out into the yard like comets
学生案例工请阅读以下段落,思考其与段首句
(彗星)falling from the sky.
是否衔接恰当。
I found myself a perfectly smooth rock and
Para.1:I waited until it was dark.When the
sent it for a ride.The stone was too smooth.
old lady came back home,I handed the envelope
however,so it slipped from my hand as I let it
that I've prepared.After handing it,I was scared
go and headed straight for a small window on the
to death,and I ran away quickly.However,I
old lady's back porch().At the sound of broken
still wanted to know whether she could forgive
glass,we took off from the old lady's yard faster
me.Thus.I hid after a big stone,and just saw
than any of our missiles