内容正文:
如何写议论文
How to write an argumentation ?
写作按照写作类型来说,有图画作文,图表作文,提纲作文,开放作文。
按照文体类型来说,有记叙文,说明文,议论文和应用文。
针对不同的文章都要针对不同的应试技巧去动笔。
Introduction : an introduction to the essay
Body : evidence to support your idea
(用论据说明自己的观点)
Conclusion: state or restate your idea
结论(重申自己的观点, 呼应前文)
Argumentation (议论文)
范例1:
某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Young teachers or elderly teachers,which do you prefer?”
请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文,向该报社投稿。
老年教师
青年教师
·教学耐心.讲解细致.经验丰富
·精力充沛.教学活泼.勇于创新
你的观点?
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好,不计入总数;2.短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确,结构合理,紧凑连贯
学生作品1:
Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers. There are some reasons below.
For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching. They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers! For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience. This is also the most important, especially for us senior students.
This is only my opinion. I think young teachers are also good.
点评:
亮点:1、观点鲜明,词汇句型的运用
比较灵活
2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。
2、审题不全面,忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。
∧
1)
2)
3)
1) Compared
2) more
3) try to make the classes
lively and interesting
不足之处:
1、个别地方的表达需
要改进。
学生作品2:
Opinions are divided on this question.
Some students who like the elderly
teachers more than the young ones think that
the elderly ones are more patient in teaching,
more careful in explaining and also have a
lot of experience.
However, the others have a different
opinion. They think the teachers who are
young are full of energy. Besides, their
teaching is lively and they dare to bring in
the new ideas.
Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderly
teachers and the young ones because from
them we both can learn a lot.
点评:
亮点:
1、段落清楚,要点齐
全,句式表达比较灵
活,能适当运用复句。
2、过渡词运用也比较
熟练。
需要改进的地方:
1)
2)
3)
\
4)
1) prefer the elderly
teachers to the
young ones
2) wit