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UNIT 3 SPORTS AND FITNESS
读后续写微讲堂
答案精解P4s妇
怎么读之读细节
细节描写是指对人物某些细小的言行举止
"I was just thinking about playing in a
或细微事物的描写,细致的自然环境和社会环境
brand new-soccer field!”Maria answered..
描写也可视为细节描写。细节描写是记叙文描
Her father smiled and said,"Tomorrow,a
写中的核心部分,有了细节描写,文章就有了活
Town Council meeting is to be held to discuss
力。细节描写可以分为与人物相关的细节描写
about the use of that vacant(空着的)lot next to
以及与场景,环境有关的细节描写。人物细节描
the pet store,Home for Pets.Why not take this
写在记叙文中占有较大的比重,所以此处我们着
opportunity to convince them we need a better
重分析人物细节描写。
field?"
那么我们如何通过分析人物的细节描写“读
The next day,with the company of her
懂”人物,揭示主题呢?我们可以关注人物所看、
father,Maria and her teammates went to the
所说、所做、所闻、所想与所感。人物的语言能表
meeting hall.On their arrival,they saw Councilwoman
现人物的出身,教养、经历和性格,让人读了如闻
Jill and some citizens already there.They took
其声,如见其人。人物的所作所为是其思想和性
their seats.After Jill announced the start of the
格的表现。人物的内心世界是很丰富的,心理描
discussion,Maria stood up and spoke first."Up
写能充分揭示出人物内心的喜、怒、哀、乐、爱慕、
till now there is no soccer field in our community,
思念、苦闷、痛苦、怨恨、惊恐、嫉妒等情感变化。
which certainly affects our physical health.Our
人物思想感情的变化又推动了情节的发展。当
team currently have to practice in a tiny school
读者抓住人物情感变化主线时,往往就理清了文
yard,and only when it's not already booked.
章的情节,即可预测并续写故事。
Mrs Lorries,owner of the pet store,commented,
【典例】根据文中人物的动作语言等,分析人物的
"I couldn't agree more.Kids do need such a
性格特征。
field.The Rockers applauded excitedly and the
Maria was practicing with her soccer mates
other citizens all agreed it would be a way out.
in a tiny school yard.They were all from River
"A soccer field would be a good use for that
Edge Rockers,a soccer team of their community.
lot with overgrown weeds and some large rocks,
Suddenly,the ball flew into a deep hole at the
but to build such one would need a small sum of
edge of the yard.It was the third time that they
money and maybe you even need to do all the
had lost their ball this month.Without the ball.
work on your own.Councilwoman Jill smiled,
Maria had to wave goodbye to her mates and
“Can