内容正文:
Sentence Variety in Writing
书面表达-句式多样性
Writing
面对高三繁重的学习和生活,我们同学更应该重视提高自身免疫力,以保持身体健康。请你以“How can we keep healthy?”为题,给学校英语报写一篇短文投稿。
参考词汇:免疫力 immunity
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第五档(21-25分)档次的给分范围和要求
(1)完全完成试题规定的任务。
(2)覆盖所有内容要点。
(3)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
(4)语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力
(5)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑(6)完全达到了预期的写作目的。
审题准、要点全、
句子美、卷面洁
2
要点全
1
审题准
3
句子美
4
卷面洁
Characteristics
lack of
varied sentence patterns
How to
solve this problem?
What advanced expressions are used?
Discuss with your classmates and underline the highlights of it!
Appreciation
V-ed
定从
定从
with结构
V-ing
主从
定从
倒装
A balanced healthy eating habit should be formed
Exploration 1 主语多样化
We should form a balanced healthy eating habit.
sb. do sth.
sth. be done
are necessary.
is necessary to drink water and to eat breakfast.
It
They are drinking water and eating breakfast.
Drinking water and eating breakfast
What she needs is to have a good rest.
She needs to have a good rest.
主从
Doing outdoor sports benefits us most.
What benefits us most is doing outdoor sports.
skill 1
variety in
Subject
主语多样化
sth
Doing/To do
It 作形式主语
主语从句(what)
A balanced healthy diet is a must for teenagers.
It provides the body with nutrition to fight many diseases.
定从
A balanced healthy diet which provides the body with nutrition to fight many diseases is a must for teenagers.
Exploration 2 定语多样化
A balanced healthy diet is a must for teenagers.
It provides the body with nutrition to fight many diseases.
非谓语
A balanced healthy diet providing the body with nutrition to fight many diseases is a must for teenagers.
Exploration 2 定语多样化
We are supposed to arrange an occasional short holiday, which can give us a relief from the pressure of work./giving us a relief from...
We are supposed to arrange an occasional short holiday.
It can give us a relief from the pressure of