内容正文:
高考英语作文的有效拓展
高考写作专题复习
Why not be a teacher this time?
Read the writings below and grade them with your desk mates.
诊断:
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
How are you, my dear exchange student Bob? I planned to go to the book store with you this Saturday afternoon. I have been excited about it for a whole week. However, something happened all of a sudden and I have to say sorry that I can’t go with you.
I’m terribly sorry but my English teacher asks me to attend a debate training class on Saturday afternoon, which is a preparation for the contest next week. It is so important that I can’t miss. You know, debating has been my favorite and winning in the debating competition has been my dream. You will understand me, right? Shall we make it next weekend? If you can, please tell me. I will give you some gifts to make up for my fault.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Saturday afternoon. I’m writing to say sorry to you.
My monitor has informed me that our class will hold a welcome party to a new student this Saturday afternoon. Everyone must attend. Shall we meet at 9 am on Sunday morning? If you can, please let me know.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2016全国卷I)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。
(2016全国卷I)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。
1.暑假想去外贸公司兼职
2.已写好申请书和简历
3.请外教帮忙修改所附材料的文字和格式
如何合理地拓展内容?
小组讨论!
I want to take a part-time job in a company that deals with foreign business in summer vacation.
I have written an application letter and a personal resume.
Would you please correct the mistakes in the material