内容正文:
邀请信
——十校联考应用文
应用文的目的
—实现交际目的
真实地考虑对方感受(读者意识)
假定你是校英语俱乐部 “Language and culture” 的负责人李华,请给外教 Peter 写邮件邀请他做一次讲座。
内容包括:1.讲座的时间和地点;2.讲座对象;3.讲座的内容;
注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题
体裁
写作对象
人称
时态
写作目的
要点
语气
邀请信(决定格式和语言模板)
校英语俱乐部负责人李华→外教
第一人称(I/We)+第二人称(you)
一般现在时+一般将来时
成功邀请外教做讲座
讲座时间和地点;对象;内容
尊重真诚
You can do ×
You should do ×
读者意识之第一段
I’m Li Hua, 同位语. I’m writing to invite you to do…
I’m Li Hua,校英语俱乐部 “Language and culture” 的负责人. I’m writing to invite you to do…
in charge of
take charge of
be responsible for
head n.负责人;领导人
leader n.领袖;领导者(语义不是很契合)
I’m Li Hua, the head of English Club Language and Culture. I’m writing to invite you to deliver a lecture.
读者意识之第二段
讲座时间和地点;对象;内容
高级句式+词块+细节增加
The lecture will be held next Friday in the lecture hall.
Our speech will start on October 15th at 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. in the lecture hall.
时间太笼统显得邀请不真诚
时间由小到大
具体时间月日年
from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. on October 15th in the lecture hall
读者意识之第二段
对象
高级句式+词块+细节增加
没有提及(要点缺失)
提及了都基本可行
Students who are interested will participate in it.
all students
club members
读者意识之第二段
高级句式+词块+细节增加
讲座内容
how to improve English
English language, English culture and the role of English
English traditional cultural activities
Language and culture
the difference between Chinese and English
practical ways of learning English
English learning
!!!细究题目(深意)
English
n.英语;英文
adj.英格兰的;英国的;英格兰人的;英国人的
⭐
⭐
读者意识之第二段
讲座内容
!!!细究题目(深意)
Language and culture
the difference between Chinese and English
the role of English in American history
how British culture has influenced the development of English
how English reflects the change of American culture/history
the origin and development of English
the diversity of languages and the corresponding cultures
the history of Britain
some ways of learning English
1+1
读者意识之第三段
希望邀请成功+尽快回复
I would appreciate it /be grateful if you could accept my invitation.
It would be greatly appreciated if you could accept my invitation.
Your presence will definitely add color to our ac