内容正文:
告知分享信
审题
假如你是李华,你的学校开展了一场关于高中学生自主学习(autonomous learning)的活动,请你根据以下要点给你的美国朋友Alan写邮件分享此事。
内容包括:
1. 活动的主要内容(教授讲座,学生讨论,学长分享经验);
2. 自己的收获体会;
3. 询问对方学校如何开展自主学习。
注意: 1. 词数80左右:2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
体裁
时态
人物关系
要点
写信目的
告知/分享信
一般过去时+现在时
朋友-注意语言
1. 活动的主要内容;
2. 自己的收获体会;
3. 询问对方学校如何开展自主学习。
主分享并询问
格式搭建
Dear Alan,
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
Yours,
Li Hua
要点
交际目的
写作背景和写作目的
你的学校开展了一场关于高中学生自主学习(autonomous learning)的活动
给你的美国朋友Alan写邮件分享此事
1. 活动的主要内容;
2. 自己的收获体会;
3. 询问对方学校如何开展自主学习。
有重复,合并写
内容搭建
Para.1
写作目的
+朋友间问候
自我介绍
问候
写作背景
写作目的
I’m writing to share with you an activity about autonomous learning held in our school auditorium (礼堂).
审题
内容搭建
Para.2
1. 活动的主要内容 (教授讲座,学生讨论,学长分享经验) ;
2. 自己的收获体会;
教授讲座
appreciate a speech given by …
attend a lecture delivered by…
provide us with effective methods to autonomous learning
introduce the ways of autonomous learning in details
professor
give/deliver a lecture
attend a lecture
主动被动切换
增加细节!!
审题
内容搭建
学生讨论
we discussed…
a heated discussion
we each expressed our opinions and views on autonomous learning
Students immersed themselves in a heated discussion about…
增加细节!!
学长分享经验
seniors (毕业班学生);
elder年纪较长的(两人比较)
级别高的; 资深的
Outstanding seniors shared their experience with regard to autonomous learning
审题
内容搭建
Various activities have been designed, ranging from attending a lecture on reading tips to (包括…等活动) recommending the favorite English classics, followed by exchanging reading experiences(接着是交流阅读经历) as well as reading skills.
A variety of activities about autonomous learning were designed, ranging from an excellent lecture delivered by a professor equipped with profound knowledge and unique insight to a heated discussion in which all students got immersed, followed by useful experience shared by outstanding seniors. (43 words)
内容搭建
First, an impressive speech was delivered by the professor with profound knowledge and unique insight, which provided us with effective methods to autonomous learning. Then we students immersed ourselves