应用文讲评：回复咨询、慈善义卖 课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习

2023.3 宁波十校 应用文 假定你是李华， 你校学生会刚举办了“慈善义卖”(Charity Sale)活动。你的澳大利亚网友David对这个活动很感兴趣，写邮件向你了解基本情况。请你给他写一封回信，介绍此次活动的有关情况。要点如下：1.活动目的和内容；2.你的心得体会。 注意:1.词数80左右；（-2） 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 体裁 时态 人称 语气 要点 意识 审题 告知信（回复咨询） 一般过去时(描述慈善义卖活动)+一般现在时(第一段和第三段) 第三人称(活动介绍时)+第一人称(个人心得体会)+第二人称(交际目的) informal & friendly—e-pal 1.活动目的和内容；2.你的心得体会。 读者意识和主题意识 踩分点比重多 P1 写作背景+写作目的——很感兴趣+介绍有关情况 P2 活动目的和内容+ 你的心得体会 P3 实现交际目的(期待回信) 文章结构 Knowing that you’re interested in…, I’m writing to tell sb sth.; share sth. with sb; introduce sth to sb. If you want to know more, feel free to ask me. Have you ever participated in something similar? Looking forward to hearing from you. Have you ever participated in something similar/similar activities? Looking forward to hearing from you. 4 Aiming to +do目的，the Charity Sale was held +地点+时间(从小到大)[+组织者]. P2 活动目的和内容+ 你的心得体会 took place kicked off If an event, game, series, or discussion kicks off, or is kicked off, it begins. 开始 (事件、比赛等) Aimed at doing With the purpose of doing sth In order to do To do P2 学校学生会举办慈善义卖的目的和内容+ Li Hua的心得体会 in the school lecture hall/ on the school playground 一个过去的时间点 Student Union 慈善义卖 学校学生会举办慈善义卖目的 donate money to charities(慈善机构)/collect money for the poor/raise funds for the needy cultivate students’ sense of social responsibility(培养责任感) be in aid of (为了帮助某事物/人) people in need (贫困者) in local communities nurture a generosity of spirit(慷慨的精神) / a strong charitable(仁慈的) spirit encourage students to grow up with a healthy sense of compassion 1+1(物质意义+精神意义) 7 慈善义卖物品 some unwanted/ unused but still serviceable(能用的)/useful items like second-hand clothes, books and so on. homemade cakes/cookies/snacks handicrafts(手工艺品) made by students 慈善义卖内容 sell them at heavily discounted prices/ at prices below fair market value donate the money we raised to charities The Charity Sale consisted of many remarkable parts/activities, ranging from selling homemade cakes and second-hand items at discounted prices to donating