内容正文:
Unit 2 Great minds
单元话题满分范文必背
一、话题作文
1.英语报社正在征集“名人轶事”短文,请以“Someone in my heart”为题写一篇短文描述你所熟知的名人故事。(词数:80-100)
要求:
1. 明确主题,并在文中说明原因;
2. 围绕主题,进行叙述或论述观点;
3. 鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分;
4. 如果参考文中的内容,不可以直接引用其中的句子;
5. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
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【答案】例文
Someone in my heart
Everyone’s heart has a great person, maybe a person who saves the people, maybe someone who has got good spirit. As for me, the one in my heart is Qian Xuesen, one of the most famous scientists in China.
Qian Xuesen is not only smart but also hard-working. When he was young, he studied in some top universities. He worked so hard that he won lots of prizes and had many great inventions as well. Here are two reasons I admire him. First of all, he knew wherever he was, he was a Chinese. So he gave his whole life to our country. What’s more, he is the person who makes our country stronger and stronger. I’m sure every Chinese won’t forget him.
I have learnt so much from him, and I will try my best to be a person like him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为报纸投稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中欣赏名人轶事的原因,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出最喜欢的名人;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“性格、取得成就、喜欢原因”等几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,书写结语。表达“想成为名人那样的人”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②not only…but also…不但……而且……
③as well也
[高分句型]
①As for me, the one in my heart is Qian Xuesen, one of the most famous scientists in China.(“one of