2024届高考英语作文句式升级：非谓语写作 讲义

一轮复习系列 句式升级——非谓语写作 Albert 高考作文句式升级——非谓语写作 高分作文（18-20分）整体要求： ① 覆盖了所有内容要点； ② 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇; ③ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致； ④ 具有较强的语言运用能力； ⑤ 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 写作谋篇： ① 内容定档：切忌写不够、写不全 学会谋篇 ② 细节定分：切忌写不对、写不好 学会造句 学会造句——非谓语写作： 非谓语写作——站在食物链顶端的人 翻译1：因为得到了老师的鼓励，我决定勇敢面对挑战。 原始翻译：Because I was encouraged by my teacher, I decided to face the challenge bravely. 非谓语翻译：Encouraged by my teacher, I decided to face the challenge bravely. 一、非谓语写作的步骤 第一步：去从句连词 有从句有连词（if，when，after，before，while，because，who，which，since…） 变非谓无连词！ 翻译1：I was encouraged by my teacher, I decided to face the challenge bravely.（去掉连词because） 第二步：去从句主语 主语相同就可去，主语不同不能去！ 翻译1：I was encouraged by my teacher, I decided to face the challenge bravely. 去掉从句当中的主语I则不能构成完整句子，所以要改变从句谓语 第三步：变从句谓语 do, does, did, am/is/are/was/were doing doing am/is/are/was/were done done have/has/had done having done have/has/had been done having been done=done · 非谓语动词主要包括不定式、动名词和分词(现在分词和过去分词)，即动词的非谓语形式。 非谓语动词除了不能独立作谓语外，可以承担句子的其他成分。 【练一练】运用非谓语改写下列句子 系列一：状语从句的改写 1.（2012陕西）When our teacher came into the classroom, she received the surprise that we had prepared for her. 改：Coming into the classroom, our teacher received the surprise that we had prepared for her. 2.（2021全国乙卷）When you attend learning groups, you can check learning results with group members. 改：Attending learning groups, you can check learning results with group members. 3.（2019全国一卷）Because I have attended many activities of this kind, I am experienced in coping with any emergencies. 改：Having attended many activities of this kind, I am experienced in coping with any emergencies. 4.（2018浙江）Because I have been learning English for more than 10 years, I am now able to communicate in English fluently and accurately. 改：Having been learning English for more than 10 years, I am now able to communicate in English fluently and accurately. communicate in English fluently and accurately=communicate in English with flue