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一轮复习系列 句式升级——定语从句 Albert
高考作文句式升级——定语从句
高分作文(18-20分)整体要求:
① 覆盖了所有内容要点;
② 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;
③ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;
④ 具有较强的语言运用能力;
⑤ 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
写作谋篇:
① 内容定档:切忌写不够、写不全 学会谋篇
② 细节定分:切忌写不对、写不好 学会造句
学会造句——定语从句:
例句1:我希望找到一个笔友,他的英语要好。他能够与我写信。
I want to find a pen-pal. His English is good. I can write letters to him.
句式升级:I want to find a pen-pal whose English is good and to whom I can write letters.(定语从句)
【初级句型语法】
1. 翻译:我将有一个假期。 I will have a holiday.
2. 利用句中的名词再写一句,修饰句中的某个名词或整个句子。
In this holiday, I will show you around in Xi’an. 在那一个假期里,我将会带你游览西安
3. 连接代词替换相同名词(或普通代词)。
相同名词是人用who/whom 相同名词是物用which
I will have a holiday. I will show you around in that holiday. 两句中的相同名词都是holiday
改写为定语从句:
I will have a holiday in which I will show you around Xi’an.
【练一练】
1. 翻译:西安是一座著名的城市。西安历史悠久。西安人民热情好客。
Xi’an is a famous/well-known/reputed city. Its history is long and its people are warm-hearted.
写成定语从句形式:Xi’an is a famous city whose history is long and whose people are warm hearted.
2. 翻译:你应该和妈妈加强交流。 You should talk more/have more communication with your mom.
她做任何事情都是因为爱你。 She does everything out of love for you.
写成定语从句形式:You should talk more with your mom who does everything out of love for you.
3. 翻译:一个人进步快。 A man can make progress quickly.
他的学习方法是正确的。 His learning approaches are correct.
写成定语从句形式:A boy whose English learning approaches are correct can make progress quickly.
4. 翻译:西安旅游资源丰富,其中华山、兵马俑等最受欢迎。我们将一一参观这些地方。(定语从句)
① There are many places of interest, in which Mount Hua and Terra-Cotta Warriors are the most popular, none of which we will miss.
② Of many places of interest which are visited in Xi’an, the most popular ones are Mount Hua and Terra-Cotta Warriors and so on, none of which we will miss.
【进阶语法句型】
1. 翻译:我期待他日重逢。
如何翻译?这句句子中文看似极易理解,翻译成英语难度巨大。句中有“期待”和“重逢”两个谓语动词,故可以分解为两个句子:“我期待一天+在这一天我们会重逢”
原始翻译:I look forward to the day. + On that day, we will meet each other again.
写成定语从句形式:I look f