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读后续写
2024届高考英语读后续写模拟练习课课件
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目录
1、原文速览
2、情节梳理
3、关键句分析
4、词汇热身
5、句型预备
6、范文赏析
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On a freezing January morning, Jonny Benjamin, then a 20-year-old college student, climbed on the edge of Waterloo Bridge in London. That morning, Jonny escaped from a mental health hospital, where he’d been diagnosed(诊断)with schizo-affective disorder. He headed straight to the bridge, being convinced that his disease was a life sentence(徒刑).
Hundreds of people passed by. Only one man called Neil Laybourn, then 25, calmly and quietly walked to Jonny’s side.
“You’re alright, man? Why are you sitting on the bridge?”
原文速览
when
Who 1
Who 2
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铺垫2
Why
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At first Jonny wanted Neil to leave him alone, but something in Neil’s calm, down-to-earth manner struck a chord. Jonny felt faith, like he could talk to him.
“It’s cold here. Why not have some coffee in a warm cafe? Everything will be OK.” For the first time after the diagnosis(诊断) Jonny felt perhaps it really might be OK. He climbed back.
The police, having received calls from passers-by, were waiting there. They quickly put him into a police car, in case he was to panic and jump. He lost sight of Neil, the person who’d brought hope.
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How
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情节梳理
Back to hospital ….
Treatment
25 years old
Calm and warmhearted
Give Jonny warmth and hope
Neil Laybourn
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20 years old student
Suffer a mental disease
Desperate / Want to suicide
Jonny Benjamin
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Jonny ended up back in hospital..
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Jonny was over-excited when Neil called him two weeks after his post(发帖)._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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治疗效果