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如何写好一篇好作文
话题:假期生活
暑假即将到来,作为即将踏入毕业班的你打算如何度过一个有意义的暑假呢?请你根据一下图标内容,以“A Meaningful Summer Holiday”为题,写一篇英语短文,词数80左右。
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列:逻辑顺序词+句式
To start with,
Next,
What's more,
Last,
开头:As we know,......
结尾:In a word,....
plan to/want to/would like to
be going to do
it's a ..idea to do sth.
it's+meaningful for me to do sth.
列:逻辑顺序词+句式
范文:基础款
The summer holiday is coming soon. How can we make it meaningful? Here are my plans. Fisrtly, I plan to do some reading after I finish my homework. Secondly, I’m going to do more exercise to keep healthy. What’s more, I will develop healthy eating habits. Thirdly, I will help my mother with some housework, such as cooking and doing some cleaning. Last, it’s a good idea for me to learn to play the guitar.
In a word, I will make full use of time to spend a meaningful holiday.
范文:升级版
As we know, spending a meaningful summer holiday matters a lot. Here are my plans.
As the saying goes, “Reading makes a full man." So to start with, I plan to do some reading after I finish my homework. Next, it’s a good idea to develop healthy eating habits as well as doing more exercise to keep healthy . What’s more, I am willing to help my mother with some housework, such as cooking and doing some cleaning. Last but not least, trying to help others in need is meaningful for me.
In a word, as long as I keep the plans in mind and put into practice, I truly believe that I will have a meaningful holiday.
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-谚语As the saying goes, “...”
1.Reading makes a full man."
读书使人充实。
2.Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles.
读万卷书,行万里路
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句式+高级短语
1. 形式主语it’s a good idea to
2. 动名词做主语Doing sth. is.....
3.高级短语
be willing to do sth.乐意做某事
as well as,也,除此之外
as long as只要
keep in mind牢记在心
put intro practice 付诸实践
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副词的小词大用
In a word, as long as I keep the pl