2023年上海市建平中学西校英语作文范文赏析

上海中考英语作文范文赏析 一、2023年浦东二模范文 Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个 词的短文，标点符号不占格） 初三毕业典礼即将到来，为此学校开展了主题海报设计活动。目前初步确定了三幅主题 为“友谊长存”、“感谢师恩”、“美好未来”的候选海报，并在学校网站展示，征询学生们的意见。假设你是该校学生李华，请在学校网站留言，选择其中的的一幅海报，并结合海报内容阐述你的理由。 （注意：1、整木中不得出现姓名校名等个人信息； 2、照抄阅读语篇不得分。） Poster 1 Poster 2 Poster 3 Theme 1:Friendship Forever As graduation ceremony approaches, our school has organized a poster design contest with three themes: "Friendship Forever," "Thanksgiving to Teachers," and "A Bright Future." After reviewing the three posters,l have chosen "Friendship Forever" as my favorite. The poster shows a group of students engaging in various activities and having fun together.The image conveys the idea that friendship is essential and that the bonds we form during our school years can last a lifetime. As we prepare to graduate and move on to different paths, this message is especially relevant. In conclusion,I believe that the "Friendship Forever" poster is the perfect representation of our school's values and the relationships we have built over the years. Theme 2:Thanksgiving to Teachers As a student of this school, I am proud to participate in the poster design contest. The theme that I have chosen is "Thanksgiving to Teachers." The poster depicts a classroom scene where the teacher is giving a lecture while students listen attentively. The students are shown presenting flowers to the teacher as a gesture of gratitude. This image is touching and emphasizes the importance of teachers in our lives. Without their guidance and support, we would not be where we are today. In conclusion,/in short/in brief/all in all, I choose the "Thanksgiving to Teachers" poster because it expresses the gratitude and respect that we owe to our teachers. 二、上海中考英语热点作文预测一科技类 题目一:科技月就要来了，学校举办英语手抄报比赛。假如你是李华，你对中国的航空航天事业很感兴趣，准备参加比赛活动。英国交换生Tom对中国航空航天也感兴趣，请你指导他出一份手抄报，告诉他什么时候完成，建议他都设计一些什么，以及为什么要这样设计。 提示词语：history, astronaut, pictures, pound 提示问题：●When willyou hand in the poster?● What