内容正文:
2023 新高考I卷
应用文
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试题回顾
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样的分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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试题解读
语篇类型 主题语境 语体 词数
正式体 80词左右
2023考查亮点:
今年的应用文写作,对学生在校园生活中,发现问题、解决问题提出了更高的要求,需要更全面地考虑问题,才能更好地达到写作要求。
邮件
(意见反馈 + 建议信)
人与社会
核心素养能力考查点
思路点拨
时态
人称
段落安排
一般过去时 或
一般现在时
第一、二人称为主
Para 1 自我介绍+ 邮件目的
Para 2 说明分组问题(1-2个点为宜)+ 提出建议
Para 3 盼考虑+回复
注意事项
1. 说明问题时,态度应该是诚恳而非诘责,宜用委婉语气
2. 提出建议时,应当与说明的问题相匹配,达到写作目的
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样的分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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试题回顾
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match in pairs
divide students into groups of two
pair up students
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Para 1 自我介绍+ 邮件目的
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. Hope my email finds you well !
展信佳!
Knowing that you intend to divide students into groups of two at random for the purpose of practicing / polishing oral English / boosting our language competence, I'd like to voice/express my opinion about it.
Hearing that we will be paired at random for the oral English training after class, I’m writing to voice/express my opinion about it.
开门见山
Para 1 自我介绍+ 邮件目的
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. Hope my email finds you well !
展信佳!
With regard to /Regarding your grouping method for the Oral English training, I’m writing to share my personal concerns and advice.
Regarding the random grouping method for the oral English training, I feel it a bit improper and have some suggestions on it.
语气委婉
Para 1 自我介绍+ 邮件目的
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. Hope my email finds you well !
展信佳!
Though very glad to learn that you are going to organize an Oral English Training, I still have some concerns about the idea of pairing the students up randomly.
I’m so grateful for your well-intended gesture of pairing up our classmates in order to hone our speaking skills. However, I’m writing this to voice my humble opinions on randomly drawing for partners.
语气委婉
Para 2 说明分组问题(1-2个点为宜)+ 提出