读后续写试题讲解 讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项

南昌高英 第七期命题坊高阶研修 读后续写组 黄丽娜 江西师大附中 重庆市高2022届高三第一学期考试 英语读后续写试题 第二节 读后续写（满分 25 分） 阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。 A young and successful manager was traveling down a neighborhood street, going a bit too fast in his new Jaguar. He was watching for kids darting(飞奔) between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a pebble hit violently into the Jaguar’s side door! He stepped on the brake and turned his Jaguar back to the spot where the pebble had been thrown. The angry driver then jumped out of the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against the parked car shouting, “What was that all about and who are you? Just what the heck are you doing? That’s a new car and that pebble you threw is going to cost a lot of money. Why did you do it?” The young boy was apologetic. “Please, mister… please, I’m sorry but I didn’t know what else to do,” he explained. “I threw the pebble because no one else would stop…” With tears rolling down his face and off his chin, the boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car. “It’s my brother,” he said. “He rolled off the sidewalk and fell out of his wheelchair and I can’t lift him up.” Now sobbing, the boy asked the astonished manager, “Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair? He’s hurt and he’s too heavy for me.” 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1: Moved beyond words, the driver cooled his anger. Paragraph 2: The driver watched the boy pushing his wheelchair-bound brother down the sidewalk toward their home. 【试题信息】 试卷名称 体裁 主题语境 词数 重庆市高2022届高三第一学期考试 记叙文 人与自我 正文英文词数238，1个词给了中文提示，续写第一段首句8个单词，续写第二段首句15个单词。 【语篇分析】 1. what（前文主旨） 一位成功的年轻经理正开着自己的汽车在附近街区里行驶，突然一块鹅卵石砸到了车上，这让他很恼火。他倒车到扔鹅卵石的地方，一下车揪住离他最近的一个男孩，并大声斥责。小男孩哭着说，他哥哥的轮椅滚出了人行道，哥哥自己也从轮椅上掉落，他自己扶不起来，可是没人帮他，他只能扔鹅卵石引起别人的注意，他问年轻经理能不能帮他扶起哥哥。故事由此展开。 2. why（故事主题） 给他人提供帮助。 3. how（写作技巧） 第三人称、记叙、描写 4. 具体内容（利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析） 点题 这篇文章没有标题，作者将文章的信息浓缩在了第一段中。通过阅读第一段可知，本章讲述的是a pebble hit i