Unit 3 Section 5 Writing about a family memory-【赢在微点】轻松课堂2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第一册（外研版2019）

Section 5　Writing about a family memory 题型解读 谋篇思路 记叙文应清晰描述事情的经过,说明事情的六要素(what, who, when, where, why, how),尾段应提及感想 第一~二段:按时间顺序描述活动或事件经过 第三段:写明体会或感想 积满分素材 　 ■ 夺人眼球开头句 1.We set off early in the morning and it took us more than two hours to get there.我们一大早就出发了,花了两个多小时才到达那儿。 2.When I was a very little child, my father created a very interesting game.我很小的时候,爸爸开发了一个非常有趣的游戏。 ■ 亮点出彩篇中句 1.Every time my father arrived home at the end of the day, we􀆳d greet him at the door.每天爸爸在一天结束后回到家中,我们都在门口迎接他。 2.My sister and I thought my father was cool for getting us out of trouble.我妹妹和我认为爸爸帮我们摆脱了困境真是太棒了。 3.No matter how many times I asked to watch cartoons, my parents would not let me.无论我请求多少次,我父母就是不让我看卡通片。 ■ 韵味无穷结尾句 1.It was the most exciting moment that I had ever experienced.这是我所经历的最激动人心的时刻。 2.What a significant day I had today!我今天过得多么有意义啊! 3.We enjoyed ourselves/had fun/had a good time today.今天我们过得很愉快。 练写作规范 　　假定你是李华。你去看望了住在乡下的爷爷奶奶。请你用英语写一篇短文。要点包括:1.爷爷奶奶高兴的心情;2.帮助爷爷奶奶做饭;3.你的感受。 注意:写作词数应为80左右。 第一步:认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁 人称 时态 要点结构图 开头点题(陈述心情) 看望爷爷奶奶时,他们的心情 记叙文 第一、三人称 一般过去时 主体段落(具体清晰) 说明事情发展的先后 尾段(简练到位) 说明自己的感受 第二步:由词及句　准确表达 1.他们对我的意外到访感到很高兴。他们拿出水果和零食让我吃。(so ... that ... 从句) They were so happy at my unexpected visit that they took out fruits and snacks for me to enjoy.  2.接下来他们问我一系列的与我的生活和学习有关的问题。(主谓宾) Next came the moment when they asked me a series of questions on my life and study.  3.我最终帮他们做午饭。(end up) I ended up helping them prepare lunch.  4.美味的午餐后,我和他们道别回家。(主谓宾) After the delicious lunch, I said goodbye to them and set off home.  5.尽管看望时间很短,我认为很有意义。(despite) Despite the short visit, I think it is quite meaningful.  6.无论我们多么忙碌,我们应该找他们聊天。(状语从句) However/No matter how busy we are, we should turn to them for a chat.  第三步:合理过渡　完美卷面(用恰当的衔接过渡词汇,如obviously, then等) 范文　 　　This morning, I went to see my grandparents. Obviously, they were so happy at my unexpected visit that they took out fruits and snacks for me to enjoy. Next came the moment when they asked me a