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第7讲 建议信
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析,并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构如下:
(2017·北京卷改编)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Jim,
I'm cheerful to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,both are highly recommended.Personally,I prefer the tour along the Yangtze,the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization,from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover,the scenery along the river is amazing.That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
开头:称呼语
第一段:表明写信的原因。
第二段:这是建议信的主体部分,主要围绕要点1“你建议的线路”和要点2“你的理由”进行详细而又具体的描述,此处可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第三段:表达你的祝愿。
结尾:署名
1.I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我正写信给你一些建议。
2.You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见,在此我尽力提供一些有用的建议。
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