Unit 2 Section 9 Writing How to Write a True Story 微讲小本-【赢在微点】轻松课堂2023-2024学年新教材高中英语必修第一册（北师大版2019）

Section 9　Writing—How to Write a True Story 题型解读 谋篇思路 叙述故事或某个事件属于记叙文。叙述某个活动或自己的经历时应条理清楚。时态常用一般现在时或一般过去时 首段:简要概括故事或事件 主体段落:介绍故事或事件的过程 尾段:简要评价/感想 积满分素材 　 ■ 夺人眼球开头句 1.It was the first time I had cooked and somehow the eggs ended up burnt. 这是我第一次做饭,结果鸡蛋糊了。 2.At 7 a.m., we started on foot and it took about one and a half hours before we reached our destination. 早上7点,我们步行出发,大约一个半小时后到达目的地。 ■ 亮点出彩篇中句 1.Some played basketball, football, badminton or volleyball; others were running or jumping. 有些人打篮球、踢足球、打羽毛球或排球;其他人或跑或跳。 2.I tried to cook several dishes, waiting anxiously for their appearance. 我试着炒了几道菜,焦急地等待着他们回来。 ■ 韵味无穷结尾句 1.Never would I forget how happy they were the first time they saw the dishes prepared by me. 我永远不会忘记他们第一次看到我做的菜时是多么高兴。 2.Through this experience, I have a better understanding of love. 通过这次经历,我对爱有了更好的理解。 练写作规范 　　假如你校英语角正在征集与课外活动有关的短文。请你根据以下要点介绍令你印象最深刻的一次课外活动。内容包括:1.时间、地点;2. 活动过程;3. 你的感受。 注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.标题已给出。 An Impressive After⁃school Activity     第一步:认真审题　谋篇布局 体裁 人称 时态 要 点 结 构 图 首段 说明活动时间和地点 记叙文 第一人称 第三人称 一般现在时、 一般过去时 主体段落 简要介绍活动过程 尾段 说明感受 　 第二步:斟词酌句　靓化表达 1.上周六,我们班看望了敬老院的老人。 Last Saturday, our class visited the elderly in the nursing home.  2.我们一到那里,就立刻开始行动了。 The moment we arrived there, all of us got started immediately.  3.一些人细心地打扫房间和窗户,一些人愉快地与老人聊天,一些人甚至唱优美的歌曲。 Some cleaned the rooms and windows carefully, some chatted with the elderly happily, and some even sang beautiful songs.   4.美好快乐的时刻持续了四个多小时。 This wonderful and happy moment lasted for more than four hours.  5.我们满怀喜悦和自豪地离开了,并承诺会定期来。 We left full of joy and pride, promising more regular visits.   6.关爱他人是我们民族的传统美德。 Caring for others is a traditional virtue of our nation. (动名词短语作主语)  7.如果每个人都无条件地爱别人,我们一定能把我们的国家变成一个更美好的家园。 If everyone loves others unconditionally, we can surely make our country a better place to live in.  第三步:合理过渡　完美卷面(用恰当的衔接过渡词汇,如at last等) 范文　 An Impressive After⁃school Activity 　　Last Saturday, our class visited the elderly in the nursing h