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【写作提升】英语书面表达十大加分句型!
句型一 分词作状语
Moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.
被孩子们感动了,我决定把我所有的钱都捐给他们。
()Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.
看到父亲工作这么辛苦,我忍不住怆然泪下。
To do 目的、将来
Done被动 、完成
Doing 主动、进行
点拨:
分词作状语可以用来替代时间、条件、原因等状语从句,让文章显得更加简洁,同时显得英语功底更深厚。分词作状语的用法:当状语从句的主语与主句的主语一样时,可直接省略从句的主语,并把从句的谓语改成分词(主动语态改成现在分词,被动语态改成过去分词),从而构成分词作状语结构。如以上两个例句是这样转换的:
When I see Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.
→ Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears.
Because I was moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.
→ Moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them.
翻译:得知你对中国文化感兴趣,我写信给你简单介绍一下中国书法。
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I am writing to introduce Chinese calligraphy.
Knowing that you are curious about/ that you are keen on learning / you have a keen interest in
句型二 副词提前(衔接词!)
Besides, one of the best ways to keep healthy is to do sports.
此外,保持健康最好的方法之一是做运动。
Eventually, every child will leave home to lead his own life as a fully independent adult.
最终,每一个孩子都会离开家庭去过自己的生活,成为一个完全独立的成年人。
点拨:
如果要选一种最让人心生感触的句型,副词提前的做法是非常好的一个选择。前置的副词在作者还没说出具体的事件时,让其内心的想法已呼之欲出。
除了提升情感效果之外,副词提前也是让文章结构清晰的一个好办法。我们常用的firstly, furthermore, finally等等所谓的“逻辑词”都是属于这一种类型,同学们要时刻想着去用它。
句型三 动名词作主语
Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed. Relaxing
听音乐可以让我们感觉放松。
Doing exercise keeps us healthy.
做运动让我们保持健康。
Besides, taking some small sports equipment along with you can help you do exercise whenever you are free.
另外,随身携带一些小型运动器械可以让你利用任何空闲的时间来运动。
翻译:
1. 定期锻炼对身体有益。
Taking regular exercise is beneficial to our body.
2. 在北京奥运会当志愿者,给我留下了深刻的印象。
Serving as a volunteer in Bj Olympics left/leaves a deep impression on me.
句型四 强调句
It is in recent years that people begin to realize the importance of environmental protection.
最近这些年人们才开始意识到保护环境的重要性。
点拨:
强调句型是一种规律性极强、非常好用的高级句型,有利于增进文章的感情色彩。强调句型的基本模式:It is/was+强调的部分+that/who+句子中剩余的部分。例如:
原本我们想写的句子是:Eric found