期末复习作文重点话题好词好句范文 课件 2022-2023学年沪教牛津版英语七年级下册

七下作文评讲 1 1. 审题:定时态、人称 英语作文高分步骤 2. 圈要点、防遗漏。要点是给分的重要标准。为防止遗漏要点,建议同学们在草稿纸上列出各个要点。 3. 写提纲:为写作做好准备。根据作文要点,将句型、关键词写出,形成提纲。 4. 写全文: 1)开门见山,紧扣主题 。 2)语言正确,句型多样。 3)过渡自然,表达无误。 4)书写工整,字数达标。 Writing Checklist 写作要求 Handwriting书写 Structure结构 Logic逻辑 Sentences 句型 Words词汇 Grammar 语法 … Tidy and beautiful 书写工整,无涂改 3-4 paragraphs 分段、空格 Conjunctions 连接词 Different sentence structures 句型多样 Rich word choices 词汇丰富、准确 None or few grammar mistakes 没有或很少语法错误(动词三单、时态;名词单复数等) Spelling拼写、punctuation标点… 话题:人物描写 【写作指导】 本次书面表达要求同学们根据内容提示对人物进行描述,介绍自己最好的朋友。写作时主要介绍人物的年龄、外貌、爱好、梦想等。时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。写作完成之后,要通读全文,检查语法是否正确、要点是否齐全。 标题、开头(已给出): My best friend Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about my best friend. 第二段(逐个写作文要点:外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想): 基本信息:姓名、年龄。 His/her name is xxx. He/She is xx years old. 逐个写作文要点:外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想: 外貌:他又瘦又高,有着一头黑色短发。他经常戴着一副眼镜。 He is tall and thin with short black hair. He often wears glasses. 逐个写作文要点:外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想: 喜欢的食物:他最喜欢的食物是汉堡、牛肉和面条。 His favourite food is hamburgers, beef and noodles. 逐个写作文要点:外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想: 爱好:在空闲时间,他喜欢弹钢琴、打篮球。 In his free time, he enjoys playing the piano and playing basketball. 逐个写作文要点:外貌、最喜欢的食物、爱好、梦想: 梦想:他最喜欢的科目是体育。他想要将来成为一名体育老师。 His favourite subject is P.E. He wants to be a P.E. teacher in the future. 补充内容:为什么喜欢这个朋友;细节(用课文原句): I like him because he is very humorous. He often makes me laugh. 我喜欢他的原因是他非常幽默。他经常逗我笑。 此外,他经常鼓励我、给我支持。我希望我们能永远是朋友。 What’s more, he often encourages me and gives me support. I hope we will always remain friends. The reason why I like him is that he is very humorous. He often makes me laugh. My best friend Hello, everyone. Today I want to talk about my best friend. His name is Rockie. Rockie is 14 years old. He is tall and thin with short black hair. He often wears glasses. His favourite food is hamburgers, beef and noodles. In his free time, he enjoys playing the piano and playing basketball. His favorite subject is P.E. and he wants to be a P.E. teacher in the future. The reason why I like him is that he is very humorous.