2023年中考英语写作指导之电子产品类话题写作课件

Brainstorm Q: What are the problems of spending too much time on smart phones? Problems be less interested in study can’t finish homework be bad for eyes do harm to health Students may…./It may… … z 1 Discuss how to solve the problems. List the solutions. have poor eyesight and don’t get enough sleep be in bad health become less interested in study can’ t finish the homework Problems Solutions spend less time on the smart phones; control the time of using phones… take more outdoor activities; be active to do sports… take an active part in class put study first; make a timetable; try to finish homework… Group work 2 当前，许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机 (smart phones)。针对这一现象，学校将举办一场“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”为主题的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括：1. 学生沉溺于智能手机现象，请你就这种行为谈谈对学生的造成的两点不良影响； 2. 请你提出对合理使用手机的两条建议; 3. 呼吁同学们远离手机，健康学习生活。 Boys and girls, 　　Nowadays, many students have smart phones.         　 That’s all. Thank you. 注意:1. 字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,适当发挥; 2. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:eyesight视力, disadvantage不利条件, keep away from远离, take an active part in积极参加 3 How can we write the speech? 4 The first secret 5 Top bread Bottom bread Middle part 6 Hamburger structure Beginning Show opinion and introduce the topic of the passage to the readers. Explain the problems of spending too much time on smart phones. Add some examples to support them. Give solutions to stay away from smart phones . Ending Call on the students to stay away from smart phones and focus on the study and healthy life. Body 7 Can you “make” your “hamburger”? 8 Transitional words(过渡词) Opinions: Examples: Results: Suggestions: Conclusion: I think/ I believe/ in my opinion… for example/ such as… first/ second/ third/ what’s more… so…that/ as a result… in a word/ all in all… so/ 过渡词使你的文章衔接自然，脉络清晰。 The second secret 9 Improve the pass