第3部分 第6讲 如何打造精彩绝伦的结尾（word教参）-【正禾一本通】2024高考英语高三一轮总复习高效讲义（外研版，新教材新高考）

第六讲　如何打造精彩绝伦的结尾 续写不能虎头蛇尾，在篇末也要用心设计。由于文章的故事性、情节性强，所以续写的结尾可以是自然的升华议论，亦可以是其他方式结尾。常见的结尾方式有五种，即人物动作的画面定格、主题升华、对话收尾、结尾留白和首尾呼应。 1．人物动作的画面定格 以细致入微的动作画面结尾，更能给读者留下想象的空间，刻画出更加细腻的心理活动。 ①(2021·浙江杭州五校联考)They stood there for a moment，side by side，waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it．Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother．And slowly，almost reluctantly，she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge．(对动作画面细致入微的描写，给读者留下想象的空间) ②His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly，Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch．The moment he got the beautiful brooch，he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora's hand．Never had Dora received such a gift．Speechless and happy，she held her son tightly into her arms，with tears welling up in her eyes．(表现母亲对儿子深深的爱) 2．主题升华 从故事引出道理，由浅入深，最后以升华主题结尾，总结全文。这种写法更高级、更进一步考查考生对短文的理解能力和概括能力。 ①Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model．To me there is none other than my mum．She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know．Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a famous dancer．Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mum．(母爱的深远影响) ②I am extremely unhappy about it．I think money doesn't equal happiness．And free lifestyle also doesn't equal happiness．The real happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything useful for our society．Most of my classmates support me．But some of them think money is everything．In my opinion, money can't take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and your happiness．(表达自己的价值观) 3．对话收尾 以简单的对话形式结尾，适合记叙文续写，简单又灵活。 ①Chester said his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother，but both brothers had changed their last names．“He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that he's been looking for us ever since we lost contact，”he said．Ch