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Step 3 巧衔接——增强行文过渡流畅
衔接1 起始与顺序
阅卷老师看文章一般要通过一些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚、自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面的时序用语加入你的几个要点前就OK了。常见的时序用语有:
1.表示“现在”的有:currently/nowadays/now (现在),at present (目前),recently (最近)。
①(全国Ⅲ卷应用文)Our school has built a new stadium recently,which is located behind the library.
我们学校最近新建了一个体育场,位于图书馆后面。
②(2021·全国甲卷应用文)Currently,we have been considering a wide range of choices,ranging from local cuisine and ancient costumes to festival traditions and folk music,but we haven't reached any agreement yet.
目前,我们正在考虑各种选择,从当地美食和古代服饰到节日传统和民间音乐,但我们尚未达成任何协议。
2.表示“首先,第一”的有:first/firstly (第一),to begin/start with (首先),in the first place/first of all (首先)。
(2022·全国甲卷应用文)To begin with,don't overfish to form a good habit of conservation of fishery resources.
首先,不要过度捕捞,形成保护渔业资源的良好习惯。
3.表示“后来,不久,然后”的有:after (在……之后),afterwards/later on (后来),after that (后来),after a while (一会儿之后),before long (不久),shortly after (之后;立即),since (自从)。
Several years after they'd parted,they met again by chance in Paris.
他们分手几年以后在巴黎又偶然相遇。
4.表示“在此期间,同时”的有:meanwhile/meantime (在此期间),in the meantime (在此期间),at the same time (与此同时),while (当……的时候)。
①(2022·浙江6月卷应用文)Meanwhile,it has two wellperforming computers and a big screen,with which we can share our thoughts with each other.
同时,它有两台性能良好的计算机和一个大屏幕,我们可以通过它彼此分享我们的想法。
②(2020·全国Ⅰ卷应用文)In the meanwhile,she secretly stuck some famous sayings such as “where there is a will,there is a way” on my table,reminding me to keep a positive attitude toward life.
与此同时,她偷偷地在我的桌子上贴了一些名言,如“有志者,事竟成”,提醒我要保持积极的人生态度。
5.表示“最后”的有:finally/lastly(最后),in the end/eventually/at last (终于)。
(2021·全国甲卷应用文)Eventually,I am strongly eager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.
最后,我很想知道中国传统文化的哪些方面最能引起你们的好奇心。
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1.完成片段
首先,我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他在屋子里的东西收集起来放好,然后擦去所有家具上的灰尘,之后扫地、拖地。
①Firstly,I collected all the books,newspapers and other things in the rooms and put them in place.②Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.③After that,I swept and mopped the floors.
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