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第9讲　话题写作(八) 历险脱困 历险脱困类也是高考读后续写经常涉及的主题，如2018年浙江高考的父子骑马迷路；2017年浙江高考的骑车游玩遇狼脱险；2016年浙江高考的夫妻吵架，妻子出走。 【 情节构思 】 【 素材积累 】 1．话题词汇 (1)动作类 ①全身颤抖：tremble from head to toe ②因为害怕而哽咽：choke with horror ③心跳得厉害：heart beats violently ④深呼吸：take a deep breath ⑤挥舞手臂：wave one's arms ⑥一跃而起：spring to one's feet ⑦摇摇晃晃站起来：stagger to one's feet ⑧加快脚步：quicken one's steps ⑨拖着疲劳的双腿：drag one's legs (2)情绪类 ①惊慌地：in panic ②恐惧地：in terror ③充满恐惧：be full of fear/be struck with horror ④感到害怕：fear creeps over sb ⑤脸色变得苍白：face turns pale ⑥又怕又累：frightened and tired ⑦如释重负地哭泣：sob in relief 2．话题佳句 (1)动作类 ①Stiff from keeping in one position for hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. 由于保持一个姿势数小时身体僵硬，他们慢慢地舒展自己的身体。 ②Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing. 手指被冰冷的水冻得麻木，喉咙被冰冷的风灌得窒息，我感到快要崩溃了。 ③Trembling like a leaf, the car was ready to be flooded away at any time, which refrained me from moving a single inch. 汽车像一片树叶一样颤抖着，随时准备被淹没，这让我一寸也不能动。 ④After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help. 过了很长一段时间，远处出现了一个光点！我们挥了挥手，并大声呼救。 ⑤The boat finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore. 船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。 ⑥Yelling at the top of his lung, Joe tried to soothe me and convince me that it was the best way to escape the danger. 乔大喊大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。 (2)情绪类 ①Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness. 沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的眼睛里涌出，我觉得自己陷入了绝望。 ②A sense of terror sweeping through my body, I shouted in panic, “Help! Help！” 一种恐惧感席卷了我的身体，我惊恐地喊道：“救命！救命！” ③Overjoyed to see a boat coming to our rescue, Tom and I breathed a sigh of relief. 看到一艘船来救我们，我和汤姆欣喜若狂，松了一口气。 ④When we pictured what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was written on my face. 当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心里如释重负，幸福写在我的脸上。 ⑤Sighing in relief, I couldn't stop thinking about the whole event.I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer. 我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再待在海里，