2023届高考英语写作指导之如何写出高分好句 课件

如何写出 高分好句 WRITING 凑长句的技巧：5keys ［who，when，where，what，why］ 1 2 4 举个例子： The man lived in Guangdong.（5 words） who-the man，from UK，Felix when-6 years ago where-Guangzhou，Guangdong what-English teacher why-he loved teaching 加工后： Six years ago an（tall） English man named Felix lived（happily） in Guangzhou（a big city in Guangdong） as an English teacher because he loved teaching（so much）. (20 words) 另外还可以添加adj.和adv.练习： 原句：We stood outside for 20 minutes. 加工后：This morning we stood still on the bus stop in front of the school for nearly 20 minutes because of the traffic jam. 积累： 表示因果关系的连词： 原因for/for the reason that due to/owing to/thanks to because/because of as/since；in that；result from 结果as a result of；there for/ thus/so/so that consequently/as a consequence accordingly因此，相应地inevitably不可避免地 加入环境，动作，情感，时间，地点，过渡 sb.,with sth.in one's hand, doing B, did A, doing C, feeling/looking… 例如：男孩跳入湖中嬉戏 冲向湖边rush to the lake 脱掉衣服 take off his clothes 跳入水中 jump into the water 原句：The boy rushed to the lake, took off his clothes and jumped into the water. 升级版：Having taken off his clothes,the boy rushed to the lake and jumped into the water. 练习：歌手唱歌 扫视观众glance at the audience cast a glance at the audience 深吸一口气take a deep breath 开始演唱begin to sing （1）The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing. （2）After castinga glance at the audience,the singer took a deep breath and began to sing. 练习：老人静坐 坐在地铁上sit on the subway 盯着手机stare at his phone 皱着眉头 knit his brows/ frown （1）The old man sat on the subway,staring at his phone and knitting his brows. （2）Sitting on the subway,the old man stared at his phone,knitting his brows. （3）Absorbed in reading,the man sat still on the subway,frowning. 包含多动作的句子： （1）Sb.did A, did B and did C. （2）Sb.did A,doing Band doing C. （3）Doing Band C, sb.did A. （4）Having done A,sb.did B and C. （5）Sb did A and B, doing . （6）After/Before doing A, sb.did B to do C. 例句：（1）I climbed over