内容正文:
压轴08 青少年问题
1.(2023·江苏苏州·苏州市景范中学校校考二模)生活处处存在压力, 有来自学校的、家庭的,也有来自个人的。有时压力犹如泰山压顶,对生活的热爱,对命运的豁达态度,应该是我们每个人心头必备的一把伞。请以Learn to Smile when We Are under Much Pressure为题,写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1.阐述我们面临的压力;
2.解决压力的方法。
要求:
1.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数) ;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确
Learn to Smile when We Are under Much Pressure.
These days, more and more students are living under great pressure. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Learn to when Are Much
These days, more and more students are living under great pressure. First of all, our parents often compare ourselves with others. They always think that we are not as good as other people’s children. Second, we sometimes have a lot of pressure on ourselves. We want to improve our grades, but we can’t find the right way to learn and so on.
Although there is a lot of pressure, we can find many ways to solve the problem. Firstly, we can be in control of our moods and learn to communicate with others. Secondly, we can dream of a bright future and keep a passion for life.
There are more ways than difficulties, so learn to smile.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,语言流畅,表达正确,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步