内容正文:
压轴07 计划和愿望
(2023·福建南平·统考二模)初中生活已近尾声,我们即将迎来崭新的学习生活。请根据以下思维导图的提示,以“My plan for the new life”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文,谈谈你在生活方式和自我提升方面的计划,以及对未来的期待。
要求:
1. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
My plan for the new life
Our junior high school life is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. I plan to do lots of things for the new life.
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【答案】例文:
My plan for the new life
Our junior high school life is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. I plan to do lots of things for the new life.
First, I’d like to have a healthy lifestyle. When I am free, I’m going to help my parents do more housework. I will travel more to enjoy the beauty of nature. And it’s good for me to exercise more. Second, I hope to improve myself by reading more books and I will practice more to speak in public. What’s more, I will try my best to keep a balanced life.
In a word, I’m looking forward to having a meaningful new life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:注意不要遗漏思维导图中所给的提示点,可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,围绕生活方式展开阐述健康及旅游方面的计划;
第二步,围绕自我提升展开阐述具体的提升方式以及对新生活的希望;
第三步,文章总结,表达对新生活的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① would like to do 想要做……
② try one’s best 尽力
③ look