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压轴01 写作锦囊妙计
写人记事类作文
【篇首句】
1. Once there was a... 从前,有一个……
2. ...was/were born in/into a poor/rich family.
……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。
3. As a child of.…years old.. 还是个……岁的孩子时……
4. There will be(a party/speech/contest/concert..)to be held by...in.(place)at..(time).
一场派对/比赛/音乐会将在某时某地由……举办
5. In the past... years... has impressed me deeply.
在过去的……年里……给我留下了深刻的印象。
6. In my life the person I will never forget is my father.
在我的生命中,我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲。
【篇中句】
1. ...gives us the impression that... ……给我们……印象。
2. ...spend his childhood in...……在……度过了他的童年。
3. I was about to... when... 我正要……,突然,……
4. Hardly had I done... when... /No sooner had I done... than...
我刚……,就……/我一……,就……
5. He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.
他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。
6. He always wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirt.
他总是穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。
7. Her eyes are very big/bright/warm/attractive.
她的眼睛很大/很亮/很温暖/很有魅力。
8. One day, I ... 有一天,我……
【篇尾句】
1. It turns out to be... 结果是……
2. I was very tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed.
我很疲惫,但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。
3. Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget my father.
现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。
4. From it, I understand we should not cheat anyone, especially my parents.
从这件事中,我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人,尤其是我们的父母。
【写作注意事项】
a. 写人主要从人物外貌、年龄、身份、籍贯、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面描述;
b. 要注意最好使用不同句式以免句式单一;
c. 在描写人的外貌时,常用一般现在时,人称常用第一人称或第三人称;
d. 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征。
【写作方法】
第一段:人物介绍:引出要写的人物并做基本介绍。例如:年龄、外貌、身份、性格等;
第二段: 叙述典型事例:通过事例说明这个人的性格、品质等;
第三段:对人物的评价:或夸赞或指责或者从事例中得到的感受、启示等。
One possible version:
Hello, everyone! My name is Zhang Lei. I'm from the Hope Junior High School. I'm very happy to stand here to introduce myself. I'm a helpful boy, At school, I'm always ready to help others who are in trouble. At home, I often help my parents do chores. I can sing and dance well. They make me feel relaxed. I also like reading. I think reading not only gives me knowledge but also opens my eyes to the world. In the senior high school, I'll get on well with my new teachers and