读后续写“微技能”之 “to show” 学案-2024届高三英语一轮复习

“Without grammar very little can be conveyed, without vocabulary nothing can be conveyed.”— David Wilkins 读后续写“微技能”之 “to show” 观察下面两个句子，请问哪个比较好？ A:It was raining hard.(to tell ) B:Thunders roaring and icy biting rain violently beating against the windows, I could barely hear any voice.— Christopher was nowhere to be found. (to show) 细节描写之方法 Example 1 To tell: My mother was hopeful. To show: __________________________________________ To tell: Mira is lovely and beautiful. To show: __________________________________________ 描写技巧： 1) ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2) ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3) ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 细节描写之高级写作句式---Advanced sentence patterns To tell: He felt very tired. To show: 1. Tom _____（get) tired , ____（lie)in Mother’s arms and ____（fall) asleep. 2. Tom felt exhausted and slept in Mother’s arms，___________________________________________ Tom 感到很累（ exhausted), 就在妈妈怀里睡着了，小脑袋靠在妈妈的肩膀上。 3. Tom felt _________ exhausted _______ he lay in Mother’s arms , sleeping soundly. 4. _________________________________(感到又饿又累) , Tom lay in Mother’s arms and fell asleep. 5. _______________________________(感到又饿又累)，Tom threw himself into Mother’s arms and fell into a deep sleep in a few seconds . 描写技巧中高级句型应用： 1. ______________________________________ 2 .______________________________________ 3 .______________________________________ 4 .______________________________________ 5 .______________________________________ 细节描写之片段赏析 请观察一下两段话，请分析第二段话的优点，并且说明对你的启示。 They went to New York to see Cats. They both enjoyed it very much. When they tried to go home, their flight was delayed because of the snow so they stayed and decided to see the musical again. Tanya and James flew to New York city. They got their bags, took a taxi to the hotel, and ch