内容正文:
暨实高三应用文写练
建议信
假定你是李华,收到英国朋友Alice的邮件,以下是邮件内容:
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing these days? I’m having some problems and would like to get your advice.
My parents want me to spend my summer with them this year but I would prefer to go somewhere with my friends. I love my parents but sometimes they are overprotective. I feel that I am old enough and responsible enough to go away without their supervision (监护).
Any suggestions you could give me about this issue would be greatly appreciated.
Yours,
Alice
请给Alice回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 感谢她的信任;
2. 回应她的请求;
3. 说明你的理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作指导 谋篇布局:三段式
1. 开头(beginning)----开门见山,向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea)
2. 主体(body)----对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
3. 结尾(ending)----呼应开头,重申观点(restate your opinion.)
写作模板:
Dear XX,
Words fail to convey my feeling when I receive your letter, in which you told me that you had some trouble in doing ....... in the letter. Overcome with ....., I'm very sorry and I'd like to make some conductive suggestions on / about......
In my humble opinion, It would be wise of you to take actions as follows. First of all, it is a good idea to do.......because ...... In addition, you should....... because.......Last but not least, you'd better........ Only in this way can you....
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Nothing delights me more than your early reply.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Alice,
Words fail to express my feeling when I receive your letter, in which you told me that you had some trouble with your parents. Feeling flattered to know you have much faith in my opinions, I would like to share some advice with you .
In my humble opinion, It would be wise of you to take actions as follows. To begin with, you should have a heart-to-heart talk to your parents to convey your thoughts that you are mature enough to