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PEP NSEFC B3 U3
Diverse Cultures
(Reading for Writing)
Q1: Where is San Francisco?
Q2: What do you want to know about the city?
written
past tense
time information
written in the first person
Features of a travel journal
time information on the first line
(either on the left or right)
usually in the past tense
written in the first person
Scaffold for writing techniques
Time
Place
Activity
before coming to
San Francisco
the Redwood Forest
the wine country of Napa Valley
camped, visited
morning
the street in the Mission District
walked, looked, ate
afternoon
a local museum
learnt
evening
Chinatown
ate
tomorrow
a jazz bar in the Richmond
District
will listen
the Richmond District
(a jazz bar)
the Mission District
( a center for art, music and food)
Chinatown
(café and Chinese restaurants)
the local museum
(immigrants from
different countries)
A Multicultural City
Scaffold for useful expressions
language features
examples
effects
discourse marker of
time
today, after camping, afterwards, in the afternoon, this
evening, tomorrow evening
to show the time order
ellipsis
A real mix of cultures here!
Can’t wait!
to express in a concise
way
adverbs
I have to admit that it
definitely
feels good to be back
in the city again.
The museum did a
really
good job of showing how
America was built by immigrants from different
countries and cultures.
s
'
to emphasize one
emotions
adjectives
.
There are so many
beautiful old
buildings
—
many
siting on top of big hills, offering
great
views of the
city, the ocean, and the Golden Gate Bridge.
It was quite
modern
and
lively
The museum did a really
good
job of showing how
America was built by immigrants from different
countries and cultures.
I selected a Cantonese restaurant that served its food on
beautiful
china plates.
What
great
food!
'
to show one
s attitude
and emotions
Writing Sample
Wednesday, 21 June
Today was my first day back in San Francisco after camping in the Redwood Forest and visiti