新高考Ⅰ卷&新高考II卷-2023年高考英语真题作文深度解读+精彩范文 

2023年全国新高考Ⅰ&II卷英语真题作文深度解读+精彩范文 （适用地区：山东、广东、福建、江苏、湖南、湖北、河北、浙江） 【考题】 第一节 (满分15分) 假定你是李华，你校外教要举办口语培训班，让练习口语的所有的学生两人一组练习，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，说说原因和提建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 〖解题思路〗  (一) 审题：确定体裁、人称和时态。 该书面表达任务是写一封建议信，属于应用文范畴；正文人称以第一人称和第二人称为主；时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 (二) 确定文章结构、列出写作要点。 此建议信正文可以分为三段。 第一段表明自己的意见。 第二段增加细节，向对方提出具体建议并说明原因。 第三段表示期盼。 (三) 捕捉相关词汇、激活储备句型。 1. In my opinion… 2.it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training class. 3.For one thing… 4.which can hinder the progress of both students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, 5.leaving little room for the other student to improve. 6.For another thing… 7.if they are paired with someone they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with. 8.Hopefully, my suggestions will be considered.  〖参考范文〗 Dear teacher, In my opinion, it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training class. I have a few reasons for my view. For one thing, randomly pairing up students may lead to imbalanced language abilities within the groups. Some students might have advanced speaking skills while others may struggle with basic conversation, which can hinder the progress of both students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other student to improve. For another thing, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if they are paired with someone they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with. Hopefully, my suggestions will be considered.  点评：. 1.此英文建议信结构安排恰当，思路清晰，拓展信息合理。首先表明写信目的，接着向对方提出具体建议，并说明提出这些建议的理由，最后表示期盼，希望自己的建议能够被考虑。范文用词准确，句式变换多样，语言通顺、连贯，上下文衔接自然。 2. 亮点展示：衔接成分使用较好，如第二段的For one thing， for another thing 等。句式变换多样，①处为which引导的定语从句；②leaving 引导的结果状语；③处为if引导的条件状语从句。 〖语篇分析〗 写作体裁 建议信 写作题材 人与社会 试 题