Unit 1-4 作文示范 2022-2023学年人教版英语八年级下册

八年级下册作文示范 Unit1 Dear Mike, I'm writing to tell you that I can't have a picnic with you. I have a serious cold. I feel so terrible. A cold is a common disease. Can you give me some advice on how to keep us from catching a cold? I hope to get your e mail soon. Thanks a lol. Yours, Peter 1.审题，列提纲 写作内容：advice on how to keep us from catching a cold 2.结构（三段） 第一段：表达感受以及写作目的 表达感受的句型：I'm sorry/happy/glad/excited to hear that... 表达写作目的的句型：I'm writing to.../I'd like to.../Here is my... (1）我很遗憾听说你感冒了。（I'm sorry to.) I'm sorry to hear that you have a serious cold. (2）我想要给你一些建议避免感冒。（'d like to.) I'd like to give you some on now to keep us from caching a cold. 第二段：给出建议 给出建议的句型：(1) You should/could... (2) Why don't you/Why not + do (3) It's a good idea to... (4) You’d better do (5) v+ing... is important. 建议之间的衔接：first, and, also, what's more, last but not least (1）首先，你应该多运动来保持健康。 Firstly, you should do more exercise to keep healthy. (2）你最好吃得更健康，比如多吃蔬菜和水果。(You'd better... For example) Secondly, you'd better eat more healthily. For example, you can eat more vegetables and fruit. (3）喝牛奶对你的健康也有好处。（V+ing.is…) Drinking more milk is also good for health. (4）你必须尽可能勤地洗手。(as often as possible) You must wash your hands as often as possible. （5）如果你真的感冒了，你需要多喝热水多休息。(If... you need to...) If you really have a cold, you need to drink more hot tea and have a good rest. (6）如果没有好转，你必须去看医生并且准时吃药。(If...) If you don't feel better, you must go to see the doctor and take medicine on time. 第三段：总结或祝愿 （1）我保证如果你采纳我的建议，马上就会好起来。（'m sure..) I promise if you follow my advice, you will feel better soon. （2）我希望你能马上好起来。 I hope you will be better soon. 3.成文 Dear Peter, I'm sorry to hear that you have a serious cold. I'd like to give you some advice. Firstly, you should do more exercise to keep healthy. It's a good way to keep away from cold. Secondly, you'd better eat more healthily. For example, you can eat more vegetables and fruit. Drinking more milk is also good for health. Thirdly, getting enough sleep is i