2023年江苏省南通英语四模应用文写作活动报道---远足研学活动 讲义 2023届高考英语作文备考

南通四模应用文： 假如你是李华, 上周五你校举办了一次远足研学活动。请给你校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 活动反响。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 官方参考范文 An Educational Outing Last week, our school organized an educational outing with the purpose of broadening students' perspectives, cultivating their abilities and increasing their cultural literacy. During the activity, we hiked through countryside, visited some villages, and admired the breathtaking scenery. We also participated in outdoor games and team-building activities, which helped us learn to work together and improve our communication skills. Overall, the outing was a valuable experience, where we gained a better understanding of the world around us. What's more, we were able to develop a sense of responsibility towards the environment. 参考范文2 To let students learn and explore in a natural environment and enhance their teamwork and problem-solving skills, our school organized an educational outing for students last Friday. The activity included hiking in the nearby mountains, observing wildlife and plants, and participating in team-building games. The students also had a chance to set up tents and cook their own meals, which allowed them to experience living in the outdoors. The educational outing was a great success, providing a memorable and valuable experience for all participants. Teachers were impressed by the students’ enthusiasm and willingness to learn. 审题分析 南通四模的应用文写作是关于一次远足研学的活动报道。学生首先要明白什么活动报道的写作范式是什么？什么是远足研学活动?远足研学有哪些形式，其目的是什么？具体的内容有哪些？产生了什么影响？ （一）活动报道的写作范式 活动报道的写作模式一般分为四个部分，分别是导语、事件描述、活动评价和结尾。 1、导语：介绍活动的背景和目的，引起读者的兴趣和注意。可以简单概括活动的主题和内容，提出活动的意义和价值。 2、事件描述：详细描述活动的过程和细节，包括时间、地点、参与人员、活动内容和亮点等，尽可能地还原活动现场的氛围和感受。可以采用时间顺序或者空间布局的方式进行描述，使读者能够清晰地理解和感受活动的过程和意义。 3、活动评价：对活动进行评价和总结，包括活动的成功点和不足之处，以及对参与人员的影响和意义。可以从多个角度进行评价，如教育教学、心理健康、环境保护等，让读者能够了解活动的全貌和价值。 4、结尾：对活动进行总结和感悟，同时也可以展望未来的发展和改进。可以呼吁读者加入环保行动，关注自然和保护环境的重要性。 综上可知，活动报道的写作仍然是三段式：开头（导语部分）+正文（事件描述）+结尾（活动评价+感悟） （二）远足研学活动 远足研学活动是一种以户外活动(outdoor activities)为基础的教育活动，旨在通过亲身体验和探索(through