2023届高考英语复习读后续写练习课件（被迫去山里远足，最终收获颇丰）

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 被迫去山里远足，最终收获颇丰 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Edun did not want to go on a hike. She especially did not want to go on a long hike in the mountains that led to a tiny cabin (小木屋) with no electricity and no running water. She wanted to stay home reading a book instead while wrapped in a warm blanket. “Ready?”Mom asked cheerfully after breakfast. Edun looked out the window and only saw rain, lots of it. “We should go another day,” Edun suggested. “Maybe a hundred years from now.” She worried she would get tired on the hike. She worried about getting bored at the dark cabin. Mom said it was time to stop worrying and get into the car. Edun’s brother, Will, was waiting in the garage, who wore a camera around his neck. Will was four years older than Edun and had climbed many more mountains. He’d started hiking when he was two and loved it. Because it was raining, Edun had to wear her rain pants, her rain hat, her rain jacket, and her waterproof boots. Her jacket had a rough material on the inside. She didn’t like how it felt against her skin. 4 4 续写原文 After about half an hour’s drive, they parked at a trailhead (登山口). The rain had stopped but the ground was still dripping wet. “We’ll be there by afternoon!” Mom promised. The afternoon sounded far away. Will identified a bird sitting on a nearby branch—“Fox sparrow!”—then he raceddown the trail and was soon out of sight. Edunrested under a pine tree. “You can’t force me to walk,” Edun said. “You’re right,” said her mom smilingly, standing under the tree, too, “But you will never know what may lie ahead and amaze us.” 5 5 段首句 Para 1：Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail. Para 2：Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了艾顿不想去山里远足，但还是和家人一起出发了，由于下雨而不得不穿上的雨衣使得艾顿感觉不舒适。半小时后，他们到达了登山口，威尔沿着小路去追小鸟，艾顿想要停下休息，妈妈告诉艾顿，如果不继续走，就永远不会知道前方有什么能使他们惊讶。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文