2023届高考英语二轮复习读后续写练习课件(圣诞节没得到真正的自行车，却得到了黏土自行车)

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 圣诞节没得到真正的自行车，却得到了黏土自行车 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 It was at least two months before Christmas when nine-year-old Almie Rose told her father and me that she wanted a new bicycle. Her old Barbie bicycle was just too babyish, and besides, it needed a new tire. As Christmas drew nearer, her desire for a bicycle seemed to fade, —or so we thought, as she didn’t mention it again. Merrily, we started purchasing the latest fashion—Baby Sitter’s Club dolls—and beautiful story books, a doll house, a holiday dress and toys. Then, much to our surprise, on December 23rd, she proudly announced that she “really wanted a bike more than anything else.” 4 4 续写原文 Now we didn’t know what to do. It was just too late, with all the details of preparing Christmas dinner and buying last-minute gifts. So here we were—Christmas Eve around 9:00 p.m., having just returned from a wonderful party, looking forward to our evening ahead—hours of wrapping children’s presents, parents’ presents, a brother’s presents and friends’ presents. With Almie Rose and her six-year-old brother, Dylan, lay comfortably in their beds. Now we could only think of the bicycle, the guilt and the idea that we were parents who would disappoint their child. 5 5 段首句 Para 1：“What if I make a little bicycle out of clay (黏土) and she can trade it for a real one later?” my husband Ron thought. Para 2：On Christmas morning, we were excited for Almie to open the package with the clay bike. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 本文以圣诞节礼物为线索展开，讲述了作者的女儿埃米尔.罗斯希望能得到一辆新的自行车作为圣诞礼物，但是作者却为她准备娃娃套盒和精美的故事书。在12月23日，埃米尔向父母说出比起其他礼物她最想要一辆新的自行车，但是那时候已经来不及准备新礼物了。为了不让女儿失望，于是作者的丈夫决定亲手用黏土制作一辆自行车，过后埃米尔可以用黏土自行车和父母交换真正的自行车。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1：“What if I make a little bicycle out of clay (黏土) and she can trade it for a real one later?” my husband Ron thought. 由第一段首句内容“如果我用黏土制作一辆小型的自行车，她可以过后和我们交换真正的自