内容正文:
“Look at the Kitchen! what did you do ?”Judging from his voice, it was evident that he was trapped in a sea of anger.
Judging from sb.’s voice/ eyes / expression/ behavior, it was evident that sb. was trapped in + 情绪
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translation
从他的表情来看,他十分地沮丧。
从他的声音来看,很明显,他很痛苦。
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David’ s Run
Text analysis
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Who
Where
When
What
Why/How
I, David, school’s coach, David’s classmates
an unknown small town
a certain day of a cross-country run
David decided not to run
David has a ________________; He was afaid that the kids from other schools would___________him
brain disease
laugh at
David told me that he didn’t want to run.
His coach told that David was afraid of being laughed at
Though David had a brain disease, he practised running positively.
Focus on the given two sentences.
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beginning
process
climax
Ending?
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prediction
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Please guess the ending according to the two given sentences:
Para1. We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.
Para2: I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
Predict
David decided to run and finished the competition.
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What to write? ----Para 1
Para2: I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
推断一:David decided to run.(He changed his minds)
Why did he decide to run?/what made him change the minds?
Para1. We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me.
推断二: I persuaded David to run.
What did I say to encourage/persuade him?
The core: my encouragement for David
David changed his mind
Para1:Outline the possible plots or events in Chinese or English
What to write?----Para 2
The core: running process
David’s thoughts and my feelings
Accoring to the ending we predicted before:
David finished the competition.
Para2: I watch