2023年浙江卷一月高考英语写作部分分作文及提分策略讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习高

应用文题目： 上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动，请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1.活动的感受和过程2.收获与感想。 考场作文1： 13分（满分15分） Getting to Know the Plants Around Us Last weekend witnessed an activity called "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us" held by our Student Union. During the weekend, volunteers showed students around the campus introducing various kinds of plants in our school. With that topic of “the importance of plants", a lecture which received generous applause from audience was given in the auditorium hall on Saturday night. On Sunday, samples of plants offered by students were exhibited in the gallery. Students were more than glad to participate in it. I'm no exception: Not only did I learn more about plants, but I also got aware of protecting plants. Such activity is definitely beautiful and fun. Look forward to next one.           考场作文2： 13分（满分15分） Getting to Know the Plants Around Us Last Sunday witnessed an activity themed on "Getting to Know the Plants around us" launched by the Students' Union. Every classmate in Senior 3 participated in it. At 8:00 am, as scheduled, we gathered together to observe the trees and flowers on campus one by one. Certainly the maples, the tea flower trees and even Mudan flowers all captured our eyes, with fragrance and ravishing beauty along the way. After lunch, some of us took photos of the vigorous plants and shared them at the auditorium. Applause and cheers of appreciation lingered long in it. Highly spoken of, this event proved to be a precious opportunity, immersing everyone into the marvellous and sheer experience of nature.           高分技巧： 1.写应用文不要假、大、空，可以举一些与话题相关的话题词汇，比如这篇文章中的samples，maples 2.写作活动要与活动本身有关系，比如第一篇三个活动分别是：逛校园-看植物，演讲-植物重要性，展览-植物样本。逛校园演讲和展览都是比较常见的活动，要与话题相关，我们就需要加上“逛什么，讲什么，展什么”。稍微具体一点就可以了，千万不要泛泛而谈。 3.其他部分就基本要求了：格式准确，单词和句子表达准确，要点都要达到，衔接要紧密，字尽量用衡水体                     读后续写题目： I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently n