内容正文:
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:(2020全国卷I改编)
1.人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
写人记叙文
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体裁:应用文
人称:第三人称
时态:现在时
内容:1.人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
分析题目
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有:There are
受人尊敬的:respectable
受人爱戴的:beloved
最喜欢的:favorite
第一段:人物简介
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对于…有热情:be passionate about
善良的:kind 体贴的:considerate 耐心的:patient
教会了…有用的知识:teach sb a lot of useful knowledge
对…的贡献:contribute to
多亏了…的帮忙:owing to one’s help
在…取得进步:make progress in
对…有影响: have an effect/influence on sb
第二段:尊敬和爱戴的原因
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为…树立榜样:set an example for sb
值得:deserve
因此:Therefore/Thus
希望:hope/wish+从句
成为:be/become
这样的人:such a person
也:too/as well
第三段:点明被介绍人的品质,表达内心情感
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The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. The most beloved and respected person around me is my English teacher, Ms Li. Though she has been teaching English for twenty years, she is still passionate about teaching. She is kind and considerate towards us just like our dear mother. We all respect her because she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. Hardworking and knowledgeable, she is one of the best teachers in our school. When we have a problem, we will turn to her for help. She always talks to us patiently and helps us find a solution. In our eyes, she is not only our teacher, but also our best friend. Those are why she deserves our respect.
范文解析
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开头:As for me, … is the person I respect most.
主体:
介绍经历:Besides taking care of my life, she also taught me a lot of useful knowledge which will contribute to my success in life.
介绍贡献:She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.
介绍影响:Then such activities as … were also of great help to build me up.
结尾:
表达内心想法:Deeply affected by …, I hope to be such a person, too.
写作模板
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你校正在组织英语作文比赛,请以“The person who impresses me most”为题,写一篇英语短文参赛。内容包括:
1.描述这个人做过的令你印象最深刻的事情;
2.谈谈你对这个人所做的这件事的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式