内容正文:
2022年6月全国乙卷
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.学习活动状况描述:
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
二 审题思路
1.确定体裁:短文投稿 (字数100词)
2确定要点:学习活动状况描述、简单评论、建议
3确定人称:第三人称为主
4.确定时态:一般现在时
三 文章篇章
第一段:描述图表,得出结论——要点1:学习活动概况描述
第二段:紧扣主题,根据图表比较分析——要点2: 简单评论
第三段:发表议论,提出自己的看法——要点3:你的建议,观点
四 写作要点分解:
1)Para.1描述图表,得出结论一一要点1:学习活动状况描述常用表达:
The graph(chart,picture,table)above shows that...
As is shown by the graph/in the chart,...
It can be seen from the graph that...
√From the graph/chart above,we can see…
The number of...amount to/add up to/sum up to/reach...
√Compared with,.make up about…(组成大约...)
The figure of...is about twice as much as that of ..
It accounts for 30% of the total... account for(占比例)
写作要点:表达与提升
Para.1描述图表,得出结论一一要点1:学习活动状况描述
实践操作:
There are many ways of learning English.Recently we had a heated discussion on the
ways of learning English beyond classroom. As is clearly shown in the chart ,approaches to learning English vary from person to person.The majority of students learn English by appreciating English songs,accounting for 65%,followed by 50%of the students who learn through watching English movies.Compared with above two approaches,reading English books and browsing English learning websites make up 18%and 12%respectively.
版本二:
There are many ways of learning English.According to our recently heated discussion
themed on the ways of learning English beyond classroom,appreciating English songs is the
most likeable,accounting for 65%,followed by watching English movies,50%,while,browsing
English learning websites the least,only 12%,together with reading English books,taking up
18%.
Para.2写作要点:表达与提升
紧扣主题,根据图表比较分析一一要点2:简单评论
常用表达:
There are several reasons that account for(解释) it.
A number of factors account for...
The change in...largely results from the fact that...
This is because/That is why/The reason for...is that...
From the table/figures/data/results/information above,it can be seen/concluded/
shown/estimated/calculated/inferred that...
The