2023届高考英语读后续写万能模板以及范文讲义

读后续写固定模板 一、读后续写第一自然段 第1句：情感描写，使用情感万能句： sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb. 表示“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。” 【分析】well up表示“涌出”，我们可以这样记忆well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到了“井”这个含义。 surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.，把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了。 表示情绪的名词: ①表示高兴 delight高兴, joy高兴、relief欣慰, ②表示激动 excitement兴奋 surprise/amazement惊讶 ③表示伤心失望 sorrow悲伤 grief悲伤 disappointment失望depression / frustration沮丧 sadness 哀伤 annoyance烦恼 ④表示害怕 fear/scare/fright/horror/terror ⑤表示生气 anger / rage 愤怒 ⑥表示忧虑 anxiety 、worry, concern着急 tension 紧张 ⑦其他类 guilt内疚 , shame,羞耻 satisfaction满足、puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔,puzzlement / confusion 困惑 tiredness / exhaustion疲惫 embarrassment尴尬 gratitude感激 relief 如释重负 shame羞愧 练习1：Sunny 感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。 Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her. 练习2：Jessica感到一股强烈的高兴，在她心中升腾，奔涌。 Jessica felt a great sense of delight welling up in her heart and surging through her. 第2句：细节描写，使用非谓语结构： (1) doing A,主语+谓语B（主语+谓语A，doing B） Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling,“You're such an idiot.” (2)Having done A...，主语+谓语B 已经....,某人..... Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out. (3)done A，主语+谓语B，doing C Encouraged by the teacher, Lucy raised her hand, whispering,“I want to have a try.” 第3句：细节描写，使用 with复合结构 Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart beating fast. He turned around, with tears rolling/streaming down his cheeks. The girl stood there, shivering/trembling with cold, with dirt on her face and hair. 第4句：细节描写，使用倒装句 No sooner had sb done than sb did 【原句】The moment my mother finished her performance, the audience broke into rapturous applause. 【升级】No sooner had my mother finished her performance than the audience broke into rapturous applause. 注意事项：1.had done比did先发生 2.No sooner放句首 第5句：过渡衔接句，使用时间状语从句或者定语从句或形容词作状语: 如when，while，as，before，after引导的时间状语从句 ①When I arrived there, I walked