2021年中考英语复习 作文专题 课件+学案

2021 中考英语专项复习之书面表达 The greatest test of courage on earth is to bear defeat without losing heart. There's only one corner of the universe you can be sure of improving, and that's your own self. 1 “六步”成就中考满分作文 审 列 添 连 查 誉 审 列 查 连 添 誉 2 4 6 1 3 5 12 01 审要点 认真审题,找出文章要表达的中心及要求。 审 Search 审人称 审时态 审体裁 3 审 列 添 连 查 誉 审 列 查 连 添 誉 你校英语社团举办“剧本创作大赛”。请以“My own drama story”为题,以下要点作为提示,展开合理想象,编写一段90词左右的故事。 Main characters: Li Hai, fourteen years old, helpful , calm... Mr. sun, his neighbor, seventy years old , alone Time: last Sunday afternoon Place: Mr. Sun’s house Storyline: … 注意:1. 短文需包含以上要点,展开合理想象并适当发挥 2. 短文中已给出的部分,不计入总词数 3. 短文中不得出现真是的姓名、校名等相关信息 审体裁: 审时态: 审人称: 审要点: 记叙文 叙事部分用一般过去时 第三人称 12 02 根据所提供的信息,用简单的句子或短语列出文章的要点。来确定文章的框架,但必须确保要点无遗漏。 列 List 3 记叙文 人物 时间 地点 事件 Who 1. Li Hai (fourteen years old, helpful , calm...) 2. Mr. Sun ( his neighbor, seventy years , alone ) When last Sunday afternoon Where Mr. Sun’s house What 李海听到隔壁孙爷爷家传来呼救声 hear someone shouting for help 李海看见孙爷爷躺在地上 lie on the ground 李海拨打120送孙爷爷去医院 call 120 and take him to the hospital 李海帮忙照顾孙爷爷 take care of him 27 03 1.添枝加叶:丰富要点。 添 Add 3 审 列 添 连 查 誉 审 列 查 连 添 誉 1. (上周日下午,李海独自做完作业在家读书)李海听到隔壁孙爷爷(孙爷爷70岁,独居)家传来呼救声 hear someone shouting for help 2. (李海赶忙跑出去发现他家门没锁 , 进门后)李海看见孙爷爷躺在地上lie on the ground 3. (孙爷爷不小心摔倒了,伤到了左腿)李海拨打120送孙爷爷去医院call 120 and take him to the hospital 4. 李海每天帮忙照顾孙爷爷(孙爷爷很感动) take care of him 12 03 2、加首尾,使文章结构完整,开头和结尾应注意简洁 添 Add 3 审 列 添 连 查 誉 审 列 查 连 添 誉 Last Sunday afternoon, Li Hai was alone at home. He did some reading after finishing his homework. He heard Mr. Sun shouting for help from next door. Mr. Sun is seventy years old and lives alone. He ran outside and found Mr. Sun’s door was open. He rushed into and saw Mr. Sun lying on the ground. He said he fell down and hurt his left leg. Li hai called 120 and helped take Mr.Sun to hospital. In the next few days, Li Hai helped take care of Mr.Sun . Mr. Sun was moved. the body the beginning the end Li Hai is fourteen years old. He is a helpful boy. He is re