内容正文:
作文话题:介绍景点
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁:说明文
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:第二人称和第三人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲
写句子
引出去过的地方
I’ve been to ________. It (1) _________________ (是一个度假的好地方).
介绍此地方
概况(位置、面积、历史、人口和天气)
◆________ lies in________.
◆It’s about ________ km in size.
◆It is a ________ country with over ________ years’ history and (2) _________________ (大约...万人口).
◆________ has four seasons. Its coldest month is usually July. Its warmest month is usually January so (3) _________________ (这是参观它的最佳时间).
景点
(4)_________________(有许多有趣的地方可参观) such as the ________ and ________.
美食
________is also a good place to eat delicious food. There, you can find food from around the world. And (5)_________________.
推荐
去此地
If you like traveling, you should go there. You can try new foods and have lots of fun.
3. 巧衔接
(1) 介绍一个地方时,通常是从概况(包括位置、面积、历史、人口和天气)、景点和美食这几个方面介绍,这是通过语义相关联的方式来实现全文连贯。
(2) 本文介绍这个地方时,开始用地点名词,后面提到时可以用人称代词it和地点指代词there与前文进行照应,这也是使文章保持连贯的一种衔接手段。
4. 成篇章
__________________________________________________________________
参考模板(介绍景点)
Have you been to ___ ? If not, let me introduce
the famous place to you.
____ lies in _____ . It is ______ square kilometers/meters. It also has a history of ______years . So it is one of the most popular places for tourists. There are many _____ in it. Many people from all over the world pay a visit to it every year. They enjoy the beauty of _______.
If you get there, I am sure you will fall in love with it.
Come and have fun there.
写作案例
假如你是李华,上周你和父母一起去西安旅行。请根据下面表格提示写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下西安这座城市。
参考范文:
Have you ever been to Xi'an? If not, let me introduce the famous place to you.Xi'an is a beautiful city. It lies in Shanxi Province. It is 9983 square kilometers. It also has a history of more than 6000 years . There are many places of interest in Xi'an, such as the famous Terracotta Army and the amazing Bell Tower. Many people from all over the world pay a visit to it every year. They enjoy the beauty. Xi'an has four different seasons. If you go to Xi'an, you can