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读后续写话题——美丽心灵(下)
1、 素材积累
短语积累一一与音乐相关的短语(二)
1. light music 轻音乐
2. pop music 流行乐
3. country music乡村音乐
4. rock and roll摇滚
5. swing music 摇摆乐
6. civic ballad民谣
7. world famous music 世界名曲
8. art songs艺术歌曲
9. black blue 忧郁的
10. melodious悠扬的
美句赏析
1. Music contains such a pleasant and inspiring force.
音乐中蕴藏着如此悦耳的催人奋进的力量。
2. It's necessary to feel real music, be serious and persistent.
感觉真实的音乐,认真和坚持是非常有必要的!
3. Music is the only universal language.
音乐是唯一的宇宙通用的语言。
4. Exercise your body with sports and cultivate your soul with music.
用体育锻炼身体,用音乐陶冶灵魂。
5. Music is a very important friend; it accompanies me to the present slowly.
音乐是一个很重要的朋友,它陪我一直慢慢地走到现在。
二、技法提炼一—夸张修辞手法的鉴赏及练习
(一)定义:
【Hyperbole】It is the deliberate use of overstatement or understatement to achieve emphasis.夸张是比喻修辞的一种,是以言过其实的说法表达强调的目的,它可以加强语气,增加表达效果。
(二)运用:
Part 1:使用数词或量词(情感描写)
1. My heart broke in about a million pieces.
我的心成了碎片。
2. She was half dead with fear.
她吓得半死。
3. Thanks a milion.
非常感谢你。
4. I've told you a milion times.
我都告诉你多少次了。
5. The backpack weighs a ton.
背包很重。
Part 2:使用动词(情感描写)
1. The young girl brought the house down with her performance.
这位年轻姑娘的表演博得了满堂喝彩。
2. It made me jump out of my skin.
吓得我魂不附体。
3. I almost laughed my head off.
我都快笑死了。
4. My blood froze.
我的血液都凝固了。
5. She cried her eyes out.
她痛哭涕流。
6. It brought her heart into her mouth.
让她的心悬到了嗓子眼。
7. My heart sank when he left.
当他离开时我的心都碎了。
Part 3:使用形容词和副词(景物描写)
1. 含义:
在日常对话中,人们常用形容词或者副词去修饰微不足道的事情,目的在于渲染一种气氛,强调某种意义的事情。
副词:extremely;awfully;terribly;perfectly;horribly等等。
形容词:miserable;horrible;splendid等等。
2. 例句:
It's beautiful,heavenly beautiful.
那儿很漂亮,就像天堂那般漂亮。
Part 4:使用介词短语(情感描写)
1. She went home in a flood of tears.
她泪如泉涌地回家去了。
2. She suddenly shed floods of tears.
她瞬间泪如泉涌。
3. When they told the news,I was over the moon/ on the top of the world.
当他们告诉我这个消息时,我乐不可支。
4. He was bent out of shape.
他非常生气(气到变形)。
(三)翻译练习
找出句子的修辞手法(拟人/夸张/明喻)
1. The wind whispers in the tree.
拟人
2. The noise was loud enough to wake the dead.
夸张
3. His speech brought