2023年广东省广州市中考英语作文复习高分演练课件

书 面 达 表 2023年广州中考英语作文复习高分演练 高分演练 1 Practice makes perfect 劳动(labor) 是日常生活不可或缺的部分，每位同学都积极参与劳动锻炼。请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你们小组四人的劳动情况，需包括以下要点。 成员 Lucy Mike Alice You 劳动项目 做家务 照顾宠物狗 种蔬菜 (请补充) 时间 每周末 每天 暑假 (请补充) 地点 家里 公园 农场 (请补充) 好处 表达爱意 提高责任感 锻炼身体 (请补充) 注意: 1. 80词左右(短文开头已给出，不计入词数) ;2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 It's well-known that “Labor is the most glorious (光荣的)”. Everyone in our group likes laboring. ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 2023年广州市增城区中考一模英语作文真题 【审题】 人称：____________________ 时态：_____________ 要点：_____________________ 一般现在时或一般将来时 第一人称 小组4人的劳动情况 激活词汇: 1.分享我们的劳动经验 ____________________________ ____________________________ 2.对……负责 ____________________________ 3.喂狗 ____________________________ 4.建立责任感 ____________________________ feed the dog share our labor experience with is responsible for build up responsibility 5.向他人表达爱意 ____________________________ 6.对我来说____________________________ 7.一种强烈的满足感和成就感 ____________________________ ____________________________ a strong feeling of satisfaction and achievement show love to others as for me Composition 限时作文 Time limit: 20 minutes Scoring principles 要素评分 整体评分 内容占 6 分 准确性占 6 分 流畅性占 3 分 Composition 作文互评 Time limit: 5 minutes Composition 展示点评 It's well-known that “Labor is the most glorious (光荣的)”. Everyone in our group likes laboring. At our class meeting, we shared our labor experience with our group members. For middle school students, it's not enough to just get good grades at school. In fact, doing some housework or other labor practice is really important for us. In Lucy's spare time, she cleans the floors at home every weekend. Cleaning the floor is like doing exercise. She thinks it can help her build a stronger body and make her healthier. Mike likes his pet dog very much. So he is responsible for taking care of his pet dog at home. He not only feeds the dog every day