内容正文:
应用文之求助信练习写作讲义
题目
假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:
1. 本人简介;
2. 求助内容;
3. 约定时间;
4. 你的联系方式 (Email: lihua@1236.com; Phone: 12345678)。
全文呈现(106字)
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-talking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday morning and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com and 12345678.
Look forward to your reply.
逐句翻译
1. I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.我是李华,一个在贵校学习暑期课程的中国学生。(求助对象是陌生人,所以在开头需要进行简单的自我介绍)
2. I’m writing to ask for help.我写信是想寻求帮助。(求助类应用文功能句式)
3. I came here last month and found my courses interesting.我是上个月来到这里的,我发现课程非常有趣。(呈现具体问题之前的铺垫,可以根据文章具体内容决定是否需要。如果保留,引出问题之前需要转折逻辑;如果删除,直接描述问题也可以)
4. But I have some difficulties with note-talking and I have no idea of how to use the library.但是我在记笔记方面遇到了一些困难,而且我不知道应该如何利用图书馆。(描述问题的功能句式,建议记忆)
5. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you.我被告知学校辅导中心可以为学生提供帮助,所以我非常希望得到您的帮助。(求助类应用文功能句式)
6. I have no class on Tuesday morning and Friday afternoons.我周二上午和周五下午都没有课。(给出时间需求)
7. Please let me know which day is OK with you.请让我知道您哪一天方便。(约定时间功能句式)
8. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com and 12345678.你可以给我发邮件或打电话。我的邮箱是lihua@1236.com,电话号码是12345678。(给出联系方式)
9. Look forward to your reply.期待您的回复。(求助类应用文结尾)
不同版本(141字)
Dear Learning Center,
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student in the summer program. I am writing to seek assistance regarding some difficulties I have encountered during my study at your school.我是李华,一个参加暑期课程的中国学生。我写信想就我在学习期间遇到的一些困难寻求帮助。
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