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Tina Young
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YEAR-END REPORT
优化句子表达常见微技能
Activity1: Watch and describe
waved
greeted
glanced at
Jack __________ his new classmates.
Jack __________ his hand.
Jack__________ the whole class.
Jack __________ his new classmates,__________ his hand and__________ the whole class.
greeted
waved
glanced at
Jack was lonely and heart-broken.
He lowered his eyes and almost cried.
,he lowered his eyes and
almost cried.
Lonely and heart-broken
The little piggy didn’t want to sit together with Jack.
The little piggy didn’t want to play with Jack.
Jack was lonely and sad.
The little piggy didn’t want to sit together ___ play with Jack,_____ made Jack lonely and sad.
or
which
“Let’s keep it a secret!” said Tom.
Jack was unhappy.
“Let’s keep it a secret!”________ Tom.
Jack was _______.
whispered
depressed/upset/blue
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Jack walked to his seat.
Jack knocked off lots of books.
Jack walked to his seat ,________(knock) off lots of books.
knocking
The football ws stuck on his spines.
Jack froze and felt embarrassed.
With the football stuck on his spines,Jack froze and felt embarrassed.
Tom’s smile was sincere.
Tom’s smile made Jack relaxed.
______ Tom’s sincere smile ___made Jack relaxed.
It was
that
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Activity 2 complete sentences using the 7 tips.
Brandon decided to leave the kid.
蹲下 拥抱 亲吻
Brandon ___________,______________ the kid in her arms and _____ the boy.
knelt down
held/gathered/embraced
kissed
She is singing on the stage.
走上舞台;看一眼观众;深呼吸;开始唱歌
She _____________ to the stage,_________ the audience,_______ a deep breath and began to sing.
stepped/mounted
glanced at
took
Students rushed to the canteen.
_______(hear)the bell after school,students rushed to the canteen ,_______ (wonder)whether they can get their favorite dish.
Hearing
wondering
1.Time was ticking(发出滴答声)。
2.Brandon walked through the bush.
______________, Brandon walked through the bush.
With time ticking
Practice
word bank
replied, continued(继续说),comforted, agreed, suggested, expla