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中考作文精讲(四)
建议类作文
首段:交代背景(对方存在的问题)+引出话题(为了给出建议)
中心段:给出建议(分条罗列;3条及以上;每条建议用不同的句式;中间用衔接词)
尾段:表达期许(希望对方采纳或希望建议有用)
首段:交代背景(对方存在的问题)+引出话题(为了给出建议)
1. 我得知:I have learned that ...
2. 很遗憾得知你在...上遇到麻烦/感到迷失,也许以下这些建议能帮到你/会有帮助:
I’m (terribly/awfully) sorry to hear that you have trouble/problems/difficulty (in) doing/feel lost in... perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
3. 听说这些问题:hear about your problems
4. 你问我有关于...的建议, 我会尽力提供一些有益的/实用的建议给你:you have asked me for my advice with on/regard to(关于)..., and I will try to offer some conducive/practical suggestions/advice to you.【offer可以替换成provide或share】
5. 我很开心能收到你的来信询问我有关于如何(处理)...的建议:
I’m glad/delighted/pleased to receive your letter asking for my advice/suggestions on how to ...(deal with/do with/tackle it)
6. 说实话,我也遇到过同样的问题所以我完全理解你:To tell you the truth, I have experienced the same problem before and I totally understand you.
7. 对...来说拥有这样的问题很正常,所以你不需要过于担忧:It's normal for sb to have these problems, so it is unnecessary for you to worry about them too much.
8. 我的建议如下:my suggestions are as follows./here are my suggestions.
小试牛刀:
1. 很遗憾得知你在学习上遇到了问题。对青少年来说拥有这样的问题很正常,所以不必太担忧:
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2. 我收到你的来信问我关于如何学习英语,我会尽力给你提供一些有建设性的建议:
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中心段:给出建议(分条罗列;3条及以上;每条建议用不同的句式;中间用衔接词)
1. 依我看来,对你来说采取以下行动是非常明智的:in my opinion, it’s quite wise for you to take the following actions.
2. 依我看来:as far as I am concerned/ in my opinion/ in my perspective/from the point of my view/personally speaking/to my mind
3. 对某人来说没有必要做...:there is no need for sb to do ...
1. 为什么不...: why not do.../ why don’t you ...
2. 我想要建议...:I’d like to suggest/make a recommendation that ...(should do)
3. 做...是很重要的/有益的:it’s of great importance/benefit to do...
4. 帮助做某事:help to do ...
5. 做...是很棒的想法/选